Recent Comments

3/20/22, 6:40 AM
I've been loving this series, and this chapter was no exception! Many of the comments above highlight my compliments. I've been loving Zeus, and Hiro and Mike are great additions too. I love size difference, and the muscle growth has been sexy too. Those big asses are hot as hell. It's so fun to read these chapters like I am tonight, locked in chastity and wearing a thong, rubbing myself while I read stories like this one. Since you've asked others before what they're wearing, this is a hot pink Andrew Christian thong with a poser pouch that pulls my package forward. I do agree with your above comment, since they don't really care about their dicks, locking them in chastity doesn't mean much for your thong fags. But reading these 🥵 scenes, the opposite is true for me.

3/21/22, 12:18 AM
Thanks @Razz TFs, glad your enjoying the story as whole so far and especially the muscle growth. Originally I wasn't planning them to grow muscles super quickly, as I wanted them to at least start as average, but still fit guys. But I wanted them to get muscles over the course of the story and since, for plot reasons, that had to happen over the course of several weeks I had to super charge their muscle growth. Besides, this is GSS, anything is possible and who doesn't love rapid muscle growth? Awesome to hear you wearing a thong while reading (I'm wearing a red g-string today). Can definitely say that my lads won't be locked up but chastity is coming in future stories and, with GSS new photo feature, I can post pics of myself locked up to show my "method writing"
Evan
3/20/22, 4:07 AM
Another great chapter. Thank you. Seeing Hiro take both sides of sex was really cool. I loved the comparison in moaning. And the strange embarrassment criteria for Jason and Brock. That their view of a bottom's cock being exposed and flinging juices everywhere is shameful compared to hidden away in a thong being more proper. The shame seeing them off to cumming is interesting too, and I like that Zeus is smart and figured it out. I am looking forward to seeing how you get Mike to find a way in. He may need to take the initiative or overhear a need for cock to get his smaller top self into those holes since our thong boys are oblivious.

3/21/22, 12:12 AM
No thank you @Evan for taking the time to write a comment. The interactions I have in the comments section really help spur me on and let me know I'm taking the story in the right direction. Mike will definitely get his time to shine, in more ways than one, so stay tuned.
3/20/22, 2:46 AM
Another great chapter! No philosophy this time, but the introduction of new, interesting characters makes up for it. I do find it interesting that Jason and Brock have almost become ASHAMED of their cocks--like they don't want them any more. It's an interesting twist as their training and stupefication continues (the scene where we literally see gaps appearing in their memories was inspired). And what is the mystery of the Dubcon Corporation? :D Can't wait to find out! You should be very proud of your work--you are an excellent writer.

3/21/22, 12:09 AM
Thank you so much @Feed Your Head, really appreciate it. Comments like that really spur me to keep writing. Will say that while they have no interest in using their cocks, a lot of their shame stems from residual toxic hetero stuff about looking at and seeing other guy's cocks, as well as embarrassment that they can never get hard: rock hard erection being a staple of proud manhood. So that's stuff they will be facing in future chapters. But they are quite happy with their junk being kept nice and secure in their thong pouches. Thx again for the wonderful compliment.
Muscle-Flex
3/20/22, 11:02 PM
Man, this is one of the best Boy Wonder stories I have read in a while. Every chapter is hot, especially the drawing out of Dick’s struggle to get out of the trap he is in.

Kyle Cicero
3/20/22, 11:49 PM
Glad you like it@Muscle-Flex
3/20/22, 2:49 PM
I can’t wait for the ending!

Kyle Cicero
3/20/22, 11:49 PM
Thanks @Jack Parker
Anonymous
3/20/22, 10:43 PM
Love this story am I the only one who kinda hopes they escape but I also kinda hope that if they fo that Scott & Collin end up together because Collin had the protective feelings over Collin even before they were mind controlled and even if they were both straight I kinda felt their friendship could grow into more even before the cave.
Evan
3/20/22, 10:22 PM
This is amazing, I loved this story. The imagination you have is fantastic. Loved the various transformations and control of the boys. And the variety of an alpha pup. You had the mechanics to throw in so many kinks and the attempt to escape with inevitable capture. Bravo.
Anonymous
3/20/22, 10:03 PM
So hot, I went into a trance just reading it
Private 3256
3/20/22, 12:01 PM
It was great to see an old favourite story get updated, and made hotter. I found myself almost joining in with the call/response. Did you ever do that school/cadet story?

3/20/22, 9:43 PM
@Private 3256 Thank you for the comment. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. Between you and Anonymous I see that my call/response technique actually did what it should. Haven't gotten to the cadet story, although like I said above, my CYOC story is coming to something akin to that, so that will have to serve as a substitute.
5/13/20, 4:07 AM
@bucke: Thank you for your support; it definitely seems like I'll have three stories in rotation: Army in Black, Soldier Slave, and Bargain: Rank and File. So I'll be moving among the three. I'll probably get back to working on the next section of one of the three this weekend (I have some work related writing to deal with over the next couple of days). Which one of the three I'll go to I can't really say. We're kindred spirits as I too have a love of uniforms, so it's a theme in the stories I write. I look forward to seeing your comments and support for the work I put out. I actually have an idea about a school that slowly turns the student body into cadets ready to go into the military, so it's something for you to look forward to. Again thanks for your support and encouragement; I'll try to do you proud.

Anonymous
3/20/22, 11:58 AM
Did you ever write that cadet tranceformation story? Soldier Slave is an old favourite story to read, and it was great to see it updated.@New Guy in Town

3/20/22, 9:37 PM
@Anonymous Unfortunately, no. I have so many ideas and I'm in a bit of a writing rut, so not making much progress on the writing front. I actually have something close to that in the CYOC storyline I've written so once I put that up that'll be the closest to that idea. But I thank you for enjoying my update to Soldier Slave; I definitely need to get back to writing more for it since you gave such kind words of support.