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3/20/22, 1:21 AM
Incredibly hot, incredibly looking forward to the next one after that cliffhanger!

3/20/22, 4:50 AM
@Some Guy thanks!
3/20/22, 4:41 AM
That was absolutely terrifying.
3/19/22, 7:39 PM
AAAAAAAAA THANKS!!! I recognise a bit of meow in Perry; Deep Trance Now in particular, other than the hesitancy yet extremely kinky. I love you~~

3/20/22, 3:15 AM
@naturallyInconsistent Well I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Cuddle-switch
3/19/22, 10:12 PM
Normally, I'm more into some sci-fi hypno-goodness, but by God, finding this modern-day realism sprinkled in amongst the fantastical made my day. Roman's slow growth through the story, and his gradual awakening was sweet and sexy. At first, I straight up didn't like him, but it didn't take me long to start rooting for him. I loved to see him second-guessing himself as he began to understand. And the hypnosis itself? Chef's kiss. No notes. This felt real without being drawn out. I saw a lot of similarities to actual hypnosis I've experienced/performed, and that really drew me in. I just wish there was more of this. My mind is already dreaming up scenarios of what it would be like if Quinn took Roman to his limits. I agree with @Ballbustingkid. Much like Roman, I wouldn't mind another round in this universe. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go see about installing stocks into the foot of my bed.

3/20/22, 2:25 AM
@Cuddle-switch Thank you! I very rarely write stories with no fantastical or scifi elements whatsoever, but I also wanted to use my real-life hypnosis experience to make something authentic. I'm so glad it's something you responded to. Roman went through a lot of characterization changes in drafts to try and amp up certain aspects of his personality and alter others entirely. I'm glad that he became a person you could root for even if he still has some work to do (don't we all). Here's hoping the muse'll tell me what these characters get up to next sometime soon!
3/20/22, 1:30 AM
Lovely story, and great execution on the turnaround theme in a non-fucking-over-the-protagonist kind of way. You also did a great job at de-mystifying what actual hypnosis is, so this was sexy, sophisticated, *and* educational! Top marks.

3/20/22, 2:21 AM
@Noam de Pluma Thank you so much! I had really wonderful advice and feedback that helped me bring this story closer to what I hoped it would be! I really wanted to go against the grain of hypnosis/mind control stories always being de facto CNC!
3/19/22, 11:52 AM
I don’t think I can truly tell how much I appreciated and loved this story, quite possibly one of, if not THE best erotic story I have ever read. Having the strong masculine big man be submissive to a small little twink is extremely rare to find, and I really appreciate that you wrote this. But it’s not just that, the set up itself, watching this man be shy and humiliated as well getting aroused by it was so fun to read. My one complaint would that it ended too soon and I wanted to Roman introduced to more things, I wanted to see where he can go pain wise, as well as wanting to see him cum hands free in his pouch there!! Please do not let this be the end, I really hope there is a sequel to this!

3/20/22, 2:20 AM
@Ballbustingkid Thank you so much! It's really encouraging to hear that you enjoyed it so much! My characters are a little unruly -- we'll have to see when Quinn, Roman and Jake next want to come out to play, but I would love to write more with them!
3/20/22, 2:12 AM
Good Lord, this is BEYOND sexy and inventive. GREAT WORK!!!
3/20/22, 12:57 AM
You are right on the track of my fetishes, please turn Tariq into a very hairy big and bushy beaded sexy arab daddy!

3/20/22, 1:33 AM
Thanks, @Beardfull1! Tariq's masculinization will be amped up to crazy extremes, so I think it's safe to say your expectations will be met and maybe even exceeded...
Mar 19, 2022
3/19/22, 7:21 PM
This is so hot ! I especially liked when the guy was made to suck the doorknob as I've fantasized about that before. thanks for writing !

3/20/22, 1:05 AM
Pretty funny I managed to stumble on that specific fantasy! Really glad you enjoyed!
Mar 19, 2022
Anonymous
3/19/22, 4:21 PM
So hot!! It's the control. It's always the control.

3/20/22, 1:04 AM
This guy gets it! ;)