Lovely story, and great execution on the turnaround theme in a non-fucking-over-the-protagonist kind of way. You also did a great job at de-mystifying what actual hypnosis is, so this was sexy, sophisticated, *and* educational! Top marks.

I don’t think I can truly tell how much I appreciated and loved this story, quite possibly one of, if not THE best erotic story I have ever read. Having the strong masculine big man be submissive to a small little twink is extremely rare to find, and I really appreciate that you wrote this. But it’s not just that, the set up itself, watching this man be shy and humiliated as well getting aroused by it was so fun to read. My one complaint would that it ended too soon and I wanted to Roman introduced to more things, I wanted to see where he can go pain wise, as well as wanting to see him cum hands free in his pouch there!! Please do not let this be the end, I really hope there is a sequel to this!

Good Lord, this is BEYOND sexy and inventive. GREAT WORK!!!

You are right on the track of my fetishes, please turn Tariq into a very hairy big and bushy beaded sexy arab daddy!

This is so hot ! I especially liked when the guy was made to suck the doorknob as I've fantasized about that before. thanks for writing !

So hot!! It's the control. It's always the control.

Nice and sexy, nice and sexy. Them fingering each other without entirely realizing they are doing it is hot. Good boys play with their holes and they sniff, lick, and finger their bro's holes as well! Firstly, I super adore Zeus taking care of them by giving them orders that they need, just NEED, to obey. So that was super fun and hot. I also like the dumbing down, but not in a way that makes them vegetables. Yeah they won't be doing math in their head but they are still functional, and I like that. I am worried about them getting money, though I see the stages set for them doing stuff online with the note that Zeus does. (I do hope they don't become corporate slaves for all that some of their money can go into buying new thongs.) Them turning the dildo into a double-sided one was hot too. Secondly, Mike is cool. I was worried he was going to be a bottom when he was like "I want to put myself between their muscles" but then he thought "and loose my virginity in their asses" and I was "fuck yeah, he is a top, awesome." So yeah, smaller nerdy dominant top with bigger muscle submissive bottom is perfect. Maybe he can learn from Zeus how to be a dominant and actually become their 'master'. I totally would like to see more of Mike and him becoming a total dominant top who loves to finger, rim and fuck the asses of his muscle sluts - while also maybe getting them to suck him off too. Hiro, well he was cool, and I like him being dominant and a top two the two sluts, though I hope his bottoming towards Zeus is an act thing and not a mindset (no submission, just bottoming) but the truth is I liked Mike more. I do like him 'forcing' Jason to suck cock - I was like "yep, good work, make him into a blissful cocksucker as well!" Oh, and the element of Hiro's cock being hard and swinging about as he was fucked was cool - I like the bottom's cock being free and hard and useless yet showing off the pleasure. So maybe either Brock or Jason can find themselves liking the idea of their 'hard' cock all flopping about in such a humiliating way as they get fucked. Also ooh. So two things were super plot-wise interesting here. Well three things, I also like the fact that the two men do not have families so there aren't going to be issues and concerns of breaking their fun up. The two main things were 1, the pink mist that appeared when they opened the second case, so that is probably how the 'curse' came on them. (speaking of which, I am feeling more science then magic, and I dig it). The second, or third but really second, thing I liked was the company name, what an interesting element. So yeah this was quite sexy. Oh, I super like the whole four fingers in each ass. Its such a sexy image. So yeah, fun chapter!

another fantastic chapter. it's nice seeing the world expanding a bit more. I have a feeling J&B will end up fixtures at Zeus' club. The gogo boy himbos will be popular there

Are you planning on doing anything with chastity for the two as they continue to lose interest in their dicks? I'm curious to see how Hiro's introduction changes the dynamic too! And yea, him getting curious with a thong certainly would be interesting!

God damn, that was freakin hot