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Mar 19, 2022
Anonymous
3/19/22, 4:21 PM
So hot!! It's the control. It's always the control.

3/20/22, 1:04 AM
This guy gets it! ;)
3/19/22, 11:18 PM
Nice and sexy, nice and sexy. Them fingering each other without entirely realizing they are doing it is hot. Good boys play with their holes and they sniff, lick, and finger their bro's holes as well! Firstly, I super adore Zeus taking care of them by giving them orders that they need, just NEED, to obey. So that was super fun and hot. I also like the dumbing down, but not in a way that makes them vegetables. Yeah they won't be doing math in their head but they are still functional, and I like that. I am worried about them getting money, though I see the stages set for them doing stuff online with the note that Zeus does. (I do hope they don't become corporate slaves for all that some of their money can go into buying new thongs.) Them turning the dildo into a double-sided one was hot too. Secondly, Mike is cool. I was worried he was going to be a bottom when he was like "I want to put myself between their muscles" but then he thought "and loose my virginity in their asses" and I was "fuck yeah, he is a top, awesome." So yeah, smaller nerdy dominant top with bigger muscle submissive bottom is perfect. Maybe he can learn from Zeus how to be a dominant and actually become their 'master'. I totally would like to see more of Mike and him becoming a total dominant top who loves to finger, rim and fuck the asses of his muscle sluts - while also maybe getting them to suck him off too. Hiro, well he was cool, and I like him being dominant and a top two the two sluts, though I hope his bottoming towards Zeus is an act thing and not a mindset (no submission, just bottoming) but the truth is I liked Mike more. I do like him 'forcing' Jason to suck cock - I was like "yep, good work, make him into a blissful cocksucker as well!" Oh, and the element of Hiro's cock being hard and swinging about as he was fucked was cool - I like the bottom's cock being free and hard and useless yet showing off the pleasure. So maybe either Brock or Jason can find themselves liking the idea of their 'hard' cock all flopping about in such a humiliating way as they get fucked. Also ooh. So two things were super plot-wise interesting here. Well three things, I also like the fact that the two men do not have families so there aren't going to be issues and concerns of breaking their fun up. The two main things were 1, the pink mist that appeared when they opened the second case, so that is probably how the 'curse' came on them. (speaking of which, I am feeling more science then magic, and I dig it). The second, or third but really second, thing I liked was the company name, what an interesting element. So yeah this was quite sexy. Oh, I super like the whole four fingers in each ass. Its such a sexy image. So yeah, fun chapter!

3/20/22, 12:07 AM
@Heru Kane glad you like Zeus. Funny how he's a character who was created as a way for the boys to get fitness equipment and now he's become a major part. He's definitely more daddy or teacher than master. I doesn't own them, he just steers them in the right direction so everyone wins. And while I do love a dumb as a rock himbo, seeing as Jason is my most prevalent POV character, I don't want them too stupid, just blissfully ignorant. Hiro is not submissive to Zeus. They're in an open marriage but since Zeus is a top and Hiro is vers, he plays the bottom when they play together. Mike to def my surprise hit with being a cute, innocent skinny twink who wants to railroad these muscle studs. Again, he began as just a way for the boys to get breakfast in Ch1 and now I have big plans for him. This is the best part of writing! Seen some comments who want him to be thonged and himbo'd too but I love my lil guy XD. So much about Jason and Brock's character arc is becoming content with themselves and each other as they struggle to balance pure pleasure with ego, and they're not going to become full fledge Thong Fags until they address all their issues and insecurities. But they're getting there. Ah yes, the company. I think if you keep reading my stories you'll find that they're gonna keep popping up with things like the pink mist and other delightful inventions.

3/20/22, 12:41 AM
@GoonNoob There is so much potential with the company. Like a gay guy annoyed at the bullies in the house next door purchases something that transforms them into his good boys. hehe Honestly, I like the way you refocused his thoughts but did not dumb in the way he thinks. Like he still thinks in complete sentences, its just that what he thinks about is focused on sex and such and not figuring out some mathematical equations. Also I really like the way you do the pov switches. If someone were to ask me to show them an example of how I want it done this would be it. We see the subs thoughts and we see the dom's thoughts, and we see both during the same scenes. So yeah I really like that. Zeus as a mentor and Hiro as a equal is fun, thanks for that. Also Mike as a dominant twink over muscle bottoms is super lovely and all my points for that go there. hehe But yeah, lots of fun stuff in this saga.
3/19/22, 5:52 PM
another fantastic chapter. it's nice seeing the world expanding a bit more. I have a feeling J&B will end up fixtures at Zeus' club. The gogo boy himbos will be popular there

3/19/22, 11:50 PM
@Timet they certainly would be!
Clicked
3/19/22, 5:45 PM
Are you planning on doing anything with chastity for the two as they continue to lose interest in their dicks? I'm curious to see how Hiro's introduction changes the dynamic too! And yea, him getting curious with a thong certainly would be interesting!

3/19/22, 11:50 PM
hi @Clicked, i don't think I'll be including chastity in this story, purely cos I find it only fun when the guy craves release. Whereas our boys here more or less ignore this dicks. I'll definitely be writing some cock lock stories in future though... maybe while in chastity to be a method writer!
3/19/22, 11:37 PM
God damn, that was freakin hot
Anon
3/19/22, 11:15 PM
These ranged from hot to hilarious, and they were all witty and wonderful! And here's a limerick from me to you, to express my appreciative admiration: A gentleman suffered a curse That compelled him to jack off to verse: “I’ve got a hard-on; I need Neemie, anon, And his eloquence for the perverse!”
3/19/22, 11:04 PM
This is the peak of art. I had a lot of fun reading these, laughed a ton, and some were pretty damn hot, honestly. Well done!
3/19/22, 9:12 PM
Not a cliffhanger!!!!

3/19/22, 9:13 PM
@stimle dum dum dum!
3/19/22, 8:52 PM
@Martin knew this is right up my alley~ Rubber transformation with mind control, always lovely!
3/19/22, 7:01 PM
amazing story. i would love to find a company offering that kind of products, and i also would t mind a continuation where Master and Toy re-don their human skins and adjust to how this dynamic will impact the rest of their lives.