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3/19/22, 7:01 PM
amazing story. i would love to find a company offering that kind of products, and i also would t mind a continuation where Master and Toy re-don their human skins and adjust to how this dynamic will impact the rest of their lives.
Mar 19, 2022
3/19/22, 5:38 PM
A very hot story!
3/19/22, 2:21 PM
Glad you've taken a shine to the more deep, existential moments between the hard-core depravity lol. Zeus' view more or less aligns to my own. To set your mind at ease; when Zeus makes his advances on the bent over boys, in their minds they are going instantly from innocently stretching after a workout into bottom slut mode. Zeus might be taking advantage of their ass pleasure frenzy, but they are just using him for his cock. If they had shown any resistance he would have stopped. hope you go read ch5 next!

3/19/22, 4:33 PM
@GoonNoob I shall indeed! :D
3/19/22, 3:27 PM
bravo!!
3/19/22, 1:36 PM
This chapter was awesome, really loving how the story is developing so far and the new characters you've introduced. Here's hoping the boys have got a thong with Mike's name on it. The only thing better then two muscle twunks is three muscle twunks. Totally ecstatic to hear that there's going to be an extra chapter.

3/19/22, 2:01 PM
haha @phillipsm maybe they will get him into a thong at some point, but I'm more interested in exploring a big, muscle bottom / small, skinny top dynamic. but you have given me an idea so thanks 😊

3/19/22, 2:36 PM
@GoonNoob Well that's a great dynamic too so I certainly won't be complaining if thats the direction you're choosing to go. But I will eagerly await to see whatever this idea is and how it pans out.
Evan
3/19/22, 5:33 AM
this was a great read. I look forward to more in general but especially to see what's in the box. i feel bad for Brock, and hope that Jason was lying to himself about the kiss. really loved the way Zeus listened, explained and gave them what they needed and enjoying his power over them, knowing they'll suck him to get access to his cock in their holes. and clearly Zeus knows what a gooner is given his explanation of self pleasure addicts. i wonder how. ;)

3/19/22, 2:12 PM
glad you're enjoying it @Evan, you can find out what the mystery item(s) are in Ch5 right now! Though you might have to wait a bit longer to find out what that kiss means to each boy. Zeus gives really good advice and analysis. I can say that he actually stands by what he says and isn't just saying it manipulate B&J into more gay stuff... though he's happy to admit he's taking advantage of them but in a way they are using him for his massive cock. lol he might've come across some gooning and other stuff at his job ;)
3/19/22, 1:37 PM
Wow. This was amazing! I admit that the lack of consent makes me a little iffy (but then, these stories have that almost as a rule), but I was particularly taken in by your continued amazing work in exploring sexuality and pleasure. Zeus offering his mentorship and explaining the nature of being gay versus straight was a great moment, and summarized the idea of "It's not gay if X" succinctly and simply. It's strange to read a story about men taking it up the ass and NOT being gay--but who knows? Sexuality is a spectrum after all...great work!
3/19/22, 12:11 PM
Pffft, these are so much fun and you are such a treasure, Neems.
3/19/22, 11:57 AM
this story is good even on the umpteenth read. fuck we have such talent geniuses in the
3/19/22, 1:14 AM
Now this is my kind of BDSM fantasy. Exactly my favorite brand of hypnosis. Delicious size difference. An incredibly caring Dom and a sub eager to experience all sorts of pleasure. I'm a big big big fan of sub tops and Dom bottoms (or just general versatility bc it's the spice of life). And of course, I always love a happy ending. I appreciated was that even while Roman was fully *thinking* his toxic masculinity thoughts, he never really acted on those perceptions in a harmful way. It made it really easy to root for him as a character, and I like how much time you gave for that character growth to occur after that revelation with Quinn. And I want to be sure to really compliment the descriptions of hypnosis. I'm not as deep into the hypno kink as most other readers here, but I'm also no stranger to it. I was hypnotized on stage once in college, and it's a very fond memory of a good time. Little details here and there reminded me of parts of that experience (and fantasies I had afterwards), and *really* got me into the scene. Great job!

3/19/22, 11:29 AM
@Razz TFs Thank you so much! This means a lot, especially coming from someone who writes some of my favourites! Your comment really hits on what I was hoping to accomplish with this story: a completely consensual hypno story that drew on my real-life experiences with hypnosis, with characters who were struggling and deserved compassion over comeuppance! I really appreciate these thoughts!