Recent Comments

3/19/22, 12:11 PM
Pffft, these are so much fun and you are such a treasure, Neems.
3/19/22, 11:57 AM
this story is good even on the umpteenth read. fuck we have such talent geniuses in the
3/19/22, 1:14 AM
Now this is my kind of BDSM fantasy. Exactly my favorite brand of hypnosis. Delicious size difference. An incredibly caring Dom and a sub eager to experience all sorts of pleasure. I'm a big big big fan of sub tops and Dom bottoms (or just general versatility bc it's the spice of life). And of course, I always love a happy ending. I appreciated was that even while Roman was fully *thinking* his toxic masculinity thoughts, he never really acted on those perceptions in a harmful way. It made it really easy to root for him as a character, and I like how much time you gave for that character growth to occur after that revelation with Quinn. And I want to be sure to really compliment the descriptions of hypnosis. I'm not as deep into the hypno kink as most other readers here, but I'm also no stranger to it. I was hypnotized on stage once in college, and it's a very fond memory of a good time. Little details here and there reminded me of parts of that experience (and fantasies I had afterwards), and *really* got me into the scene. Great job!

3/19/22, 11:29 AM
@Razz TFs Thank you so much! This means a lot, especially coming from someone who writes some of my favourites! Your comment really hits on what I was hoping to accomplish with this story: a completely consensual hypno story that drew on my real-life experiences with hypnosis, with characters who were struggling and deserved compassion over comeuppance! I really appreciate these thoughts!
Evan
3/19/22, 11:14 AM
I am really loving this series! And to have things spelled out a little. Even sounds like they could do a commission at the time and reverse it, like the curse, afterward. Very creative series. Thanks for writing!
Anonymous
3/19/22, 11:09 AM
cant wait for the next chapter
3/19/22, 9:49 AM
As long as we know it's not abandoned, we are willing to wait however long you need! ๐Ÿ˜
3/19/22, 8:58 AM
Your story is superb as always ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Anonymous
3/19/22, 8:09 AM
where does it say he enslaved the security guard? did i miss a part? i thought he was just being nice, buying him some food
3/19/22, 7:13 AM
this is getting more and more interesting. The more the control, the hotter this story gets. Slavery and obedience really complements each other. Keep this hot streak going! More toying with the toy!
3/19/22, 5:30 AM
i loved how Jack enslaved all his security guard