Recent Comments

3/18/22, 1:34 PM
I woke up today and saw an update to this and did a little dance. I get it not giving what you wanted it to, but it can still be a good story. And I'm glad to hear it'll get some form of conclusion, so thank you. I'll comment on The Finale once I read it. And keep on keepin' on!
3/18/22, 9:18 AM
Damn, this was so hot. Great twists, loved when William and Jonas were discussing how they'd hypnotised Perry in their owns ways while he wasn't there. He really is an owned pup! Loooooved the pup play, so exciting. I can't wait to see Perry become more of a pup if you decide to continue the story. The writing, set up, characters, and pacing were all incredibly well done. Amazing work, hats off! Can't wait to see what you do next, you're a very talented writer and have a creative mind. Thanks!

3/18/22, 12:50 PM
@Henry Wolf thank you so much for enjoying this story and for leaving such a wonderfully detailed comment!
3/18/22, 12:12 PM
Very Hot! Love the manipulation of this dumb jock. Since the doctor just showed him the only way he can cum is by pressure on his prostate, maybe sends him home with a special prostate applicator (dildo) to use each time he's horny...like daily when he smells his team mates in the locker room. gets caught in the stall riding the thick dong - photos and videos of him spread
3/18/22, 5:47 AM
Ooh boy this was hot, so very very very hot. No words, just very much on the hotness. Loved the buttplay. LOVED IT!! The pov switches were super great. Loved how Zeus rimmed but we saw how the boys felt. The swx was great. The finger, tongue, cock and fingers back and forth was perfect. Love one top and two subby bottoms. So sexy. I kind of wish they enjoyed the kiss, hehe, though the sweetness at the end was sexy. (Too bad Jason didn't sleep finger Brock, lol.) Lots of fun going on there. Honestly, so good, so sexy, so arousing. I like them being obvious. I like them subbing. I loved the buttplay. Thongs aren't my focus but the events here are just so marvelous. This is an amazing and quite hot story.

3/18/22, 11:46 AM
@Heru Kane thank you! glad you enjoyed the different POVs. Was worried cos I know people can be very particular about it being from a certain view point: the sub or the dom, so happy that u enjoyed seeing things from Zeus' point of view. Well... Jason didn't enjoy the kiss 😉 Nice knowing that despite thongs not being your primary focus, thx for giving it a chance.
3/18/22, 9:53 AM
I like the set up, and how you describe what's going on in Matt's head. Will love to see how this develops.
3/18/22, 6:23 AM
Ugh LOVE this story so much...
Mar 31, 2019
Martin
3/17/22, 10:50 PM
Added to Collar... it seemed only suitable. Also very hot story!

Lotus-Silk
3/18/22, 4:47 AM
@Martin Aww, thank you so much for doing that! And thank you everyone for the thoughtful comments!
3/18/22, 4:30 AM
Please continue the story!!!
3/13/22, 7:13 AM
Hey. Question. Is this series dead? I love all your works, but this one seems to be in a limbo. And I'd love to see a proper end to it. Granted. The endings of your stories are always such sweet sorrow, when it means no more of the good kinky dynamics that I got attached to.

3/18/22, 3:59 AM
@Lancelot this series is not dead. i got stuck in editing hell for the conclusion which hopefully ties up the loose ends. i just submitted the next two parts, one full of more expository stuff and a final one with a very extended sex scene. idk if i'll ever get around to an epilogue, bc i have some extra things i wanted to get into the story, but this one completely ran away from me more than once, and for now it's ending on a much more satisfying note than this chapter. thanks so much for your interest! this comment literally was the kick in the rear i needed to clean up what i have and put it out there. better post what i have than pretend i'm ever going to do a significant enough rewrite of ~14k words. i hate abandoned WIPs as a reader soooo much, so I feel you, hahaha. this one just never got to where I wanted it to be. :/ i don't hate it, but i can't say it's my favorite piece i've written, either. i'd love to hear what you think once it's approved and on the site, because i'm really in my own head about it! thanks again for your kind words, they really mean a lot to me
Anonymous
3/18/22, 1:52 AM
This is a great series