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3/13/22, 7:13 AM
Hey. Question. Is this series dead? I love all your works, but this one seems to be in a limbo. And I'd love to see a proper end to it. Granted. The endings of your stories are always such sweet sorrow, when it means no more of the good kinky dynamics that I got attached to.

3/18/22, 3:59 AM
@Lancelot this series is not dead. i got stuck in editing hell for the conclusion which hopefully ties up the loose ends. i just submitted the next two parts, one full of more expository stuff and a final one with a very extended sex scene. idk if i'll ever get around to an epilogue, bc i have some extra things i wanted to get into the story, but this one completely ran away from me more than once, and for now it's ending on a much more satisfying note than this chapter. thanks so much for your interest! this comment literally was the kick in the rear i needed to clean up what i have and put it out there. better post what i have than pretend i'm ever going to do a significant enough rewrite of ~14k words. i hate abandoned WIPs as a reader soooo much, so I feel you, hahaha. this one just never got to where I wanted it to be. :/ i don't hate it, but i can't say it's my favorite piece i've written, either. i'd love to hear what you think once it's approved and on the site, because i'm really in my own head about it! thanks again for your kind words, they really mean a lot to me
Anonymous
3/18/22, 1:52 AM
This is a great series
Martin
3/17/22, 10:40 PM
I loved that story! It should really be x-posted to Cupid! Do you want to do it yourself? Or should I do it for you?

3/17/22, 10:48 PM
hello @Martin, thank you for the comment. And yes if you feel it is appropriate to the sister site I'd be glad for you to post it there. 😊

Martin
3/17/22, 10:50 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Done :)

3/18/22, 12:42 AM
thank you, much appreciated @Martin
3/17/22, 5:05 PM
Loving everything so far. Thonged muscle fags are such a huge turn on. Getting me inspired to write again haha.

3/17/22, 9:39 PM
that's awesome @Insignia, write me some muscle thong erotica!!
3/17/22, 8:40 PM
Love the idea of the time skip! This story is excellent, always come back to it.
bimarguy
3/17/22, 6:07 PM
nothing hotter then a good musk/manscent story , i do hope theres a chapter 2
3/17/22, 11:20 AM
Another fantastic chapter. I'm curious to see what this box contains, but you won't keep us in suspence too long hopefully. Can't wait to see where they end up.

3/17/22, 11:25 AM
Thx @Timet I have literally just started Ch4. I've been pumping them out quite quickly so I don't think you'll have long to wait.

3/17/22, 11:28 AM
@GoonNoob Good to hear that. I've also enjoyed how you've been really interactive with the commenters on the chapters, and the idea of a Q&A wrap up is a fantastic

3/17/22, 11:41 AM
@Timet hopefully you stick around till the end and enjoy the climax enough to take part.

3/17/22, 11:42 AM
@GoonNoob I'm sure I will, I'll be there with a thong on

3/17/22, 11:45 AM
@Timet Awesome! You'll have to give details. Currently wearing a bright blue thong with a long, shaped pouch so I can stroke while I work... its actually amazing how fast I write considering 😆

3/17/22, 5:38 PM
@GoonNoob my favorite one is a black hustler thong. I also have a few pairs of posing briefs with ruching, so its thong adjacent
3/17/22, 3:35 PM
Can't wait for the chapter 4. I hope Jack gets used by Joe's
Anonymous
3/17/22, 12:51 PM
Another hot chapter. You're a very good writer. If I'm being critical, it still feels like Jason and Brock are really similar in personality though, even if they look a little different. I'd love to get the feeling that they've got a genuine dynamic between the two of them. Like, who is the more dominant, or who is the more willing to experiment? Like, other than needing to blend in with the crowd, why did Brock do the snatching and Jason ride the bike? Would also be good to learn what their (former?) life of crime means for their future.

3/17/22, 1:11 PM
thanks @, appreciate the compliments and valid criticism. It's easy, when the characters and their personalities are vivid in the author's mind that not everything gets translated to the page. Will try and work on differentiating between the two, even as they both become anal addicted thong fags. As for their life of crime, ch4 will see them trying to get back into the game but not everything goes as planned.

Anonymous
3/17/22, 2:58 PM
Sounds awesome @GoonNoob Thanks for taking the suggestions so positively - I wouldn't critique if i didnt think you were already a top writer ;)
Anonymous
11/15/21, 3:50 AM
HHHOWWWW do i read all of that and still want more loll I'm sorry, but you're writing is SUPERB! I can't get enough from it...

11/15/21, 4:22 AM
Wow, thanks! More to come! @

Semtex
3/17/22, 2:50 PM
@bluesuedewho it's been a while, when is the next chapter coming out ? this stuff is really good yknow :D.