Recent Comments

3/17/22, 8:40 PM
Love the idea of the time skip! This story is excellent, always come back to it.
bimarguy
3/17/22, 6:07 PM
nothing hotter then a good musk/manscent story , i do hope theres a chapter 2
3/17/22, 11:20 AM
Another fantastic chapter. I'm curious to see what this box contains, but you won't keep us in suspence too long hopefully. Can't wait to see where they end up.

3/17/22, 11:25 AM
Thx @Timet I have literally just started Ch4. I've been pumping them out quite quickly so I don't think you'll have long to wait.

3/17/22, 11:28 AM
@GoonNoob Good to hear that. I've also enjoyed how you've been really interactive with the commenters on the chapters, and the idea of a Q&A wrap up is a fantastic

3/17/22, 11:41 AM
@Timet hopefully you stick around till the end and enjoy the climax enough to take part.

3/17/22, 11:42 AM
@GoonNoob I'm sure I will, I'll be there with a thong on

3/17/22, 11:45 AM
@Timet Awesome! You'll have to give details. Currently wearing a bright blue thong with a long, shaped pouch so I can stroke while I work... its actually amazing how fast I write considering 😆

3/17/22, 5:38 PM
@GoonNoob my favorite one is a black hustler thong. I also have a few pairs of posing briefs with ruching, so its thong adjacent
3/17/22, 3:35 PM
Can't wait for the chapter 4. I hope Jack gets used by Joe's
Anonymous
3/17/22, 12:51 PM
Another hot chapter. You're a very good writer. If I'm being critical, it still feels like Jason and Brock are really similar in personality though, even if they look a little different. I'd love to get the feeling that they've got a genuine dynamic between the two of them. Like, who is the more dominant, or who is the more willing to experiment? Like, other than needing to blend in with the crowd, why did Brock do the snatching and Jason ride the bike? Would also be good to learn what their (former?) life of crime means for their future.

3/17/22, 1:11 PM
thanks @, appreciate the compliments and valid criticism. It's easy, when the characters and their personalities are vivid in the author's mind that not everything gets translated to the page. Will try and work on differentiating between the two, even as they both become anal addicted thong fags. As for their life of crime, ch4 will see them trying to get back into the game but not everything goes as planned.

Anonymous
3/17/22, 2:58 PM
Sounds awesome @GoonNoob Thanks for taking the suggestions so positively - I wouldn't critique if i didnt think you were already a top writer ;)
Anonymous
11/15/21, 3:50 AM
HHHOWWWW do i read all of that and still want more loll I'm sorry, but you're writing is SUPERB! I can't get enough from it...

11/15/21, 4:22 AM
Wow, thanks! More to come! @

Semtex
3/17/22, 2:50 PM
@bluesuedewho it's been a while, when is the next chapter coming out ? this stuff is really good yknow :D.
Mar 31, 2019
3/17/22, 2:04 PM
I think it’s very clever putting the story from the bully’s perspective when he doesn’t comprehend that he’s the bully—yeah, Tailang asked some unreasonable things at first, perhaps, but it becomes quickly clear that the POV is an absolute bitch. I can appreciate his comeuppance without feeling so bad for him.
Anonymous
8/12/17, 9:08 PM
Brb grabbing a flight to Kiev to find the Yellow Room and live there forever.

PromethiumJPM
3/17/22, 12:43 PM
Brother, take me with you!@
3/17/22, 10:40 AM
Love the dramatic changes.
3/16/22, 7:30 PM
Fun first story. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.

3/17/22, 10:04 AM
@Derek Williams oh you will get to see where the boys take it ;)