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3/16/22, 11:46 PM
i thoroughly enjoyed this, particularly bringing him back to awareness. Well done!
3/15/22, 7:13 PM
Loved seeing a nonbinary character in this story! Very curious about what's going on with Ercole's new powers!

3/16/22, 10:18 PM
@time.to.occur Always happy to represent less commonly seen minorities in my stories. But... Ercole has no powers? He was hypnotized by the stranger to use the machine without realizing it and to happily uses it to tweak Anstice's personality. I know i write a lot of magic & powers stories, but this is pure science-fiction.

3/16/22, 11:02 PM
@BobbyBlobfish On my first reading, it wasn't completely clear to me how that had operated and what exactly he had passed onto him! thanks for clarifying.
3/15/22, 3:21 AM
I really enjoyed this, there was some grammar funkiness in the latter half but I appreciate more NB characters on this stories. I actually would wanna know where it goes next but I feel like it might be a closed ending. Also, do you know who the models are? like their names?

3/16/22, 10:22 PM
@TheSatanScully Didn't notice problems, besides me not knowing what term to use to describe a non-binary. I try to get variety in my stories. I am interested in what you though was weird. Having a NB was an idea I just didn't really knew where to put, and I realized it fit really well for this as i wrote it. And yes, it was planned as a one-off. Maybe I'll come back to it if i have an idea. But it's far from the only story I would just describe couple stuff if I wrote more, and I have a glaring lack of experience in that domain. And for the models... No, sorry. Pictures found on the net. The images I used for Ercole did have a name, though. Toni Mahfud. No idea for the other two, unfortunately.
3/14/22, 8:18 PM
loved it.

3/16/22, 10:16 PM
@Jonanator Oh thanks! I'm working on many stuff slowly at the same time, so happy to see that they are still people who are waiting for my stories =)
3/16/22, 4:51 PM
Love these 2 characters. I enjoyed reading about Connor and Donny, and so really like the 2 ex-robins even more so. Please keep them the center of this story. It is fucking sexy and hell.
Anonymous
3/16/22, 9:19 AM
Would love to see some competition between the lads - perhaps Zeus wants to have a little fun. Like comparing their bodies more, or seeing who cums first, who is stronger, more dominant, how big the size difference is INSIDE their thongs. ;)

3/16/22, 3:28 PM
@ i was actually thinking of something like that for ch4 but you've given me some very good idea. thanks!

Anonymous
3/16/22, 3:38 PM
Happy to help! @GoonNoob
Anonymous
3/16/22, 5:43 AM
I love this series so much! Keep going! This is so sexy love the thongs so much and the humiliation. Can't wait to read more!

3/16/22, 3:24 PM
@ i hope you a being a thong fag at home reading the story. I am writing them.
3/16/22, 12:38 AM
Another incredible chapter! Ordinarily I skip sex scenes, but you write them so well that I couldn't resist reading them all. I have a suspicion that the mysterious umbrella-carrying man is the original owner of the briefcase keeping an eye on his prey... ;p My favorite has been the gold and silver! Shiny metallic sounds interesting. :)

3/16/22, 3:23 PM
@Feed Your Head shiny thongs are my favorite. As for the other thing... spoilers ;)
3/15/22, 3:52 AM
What a great story! It has taken a dark turn at the moment, but I appreciate your skilled world-building throughout the series and the resolution to the mystery in this chapter. If Brett and Liam get back together, they may be happier on more equal status with them both being breeders. I have enjoyed the journey you have taken us on thus far and look forward to where you take us next.

3/16/22, 1:39 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thanks glad you are enjoying the story.
3/16/22, 9:45 AM
It's kinda been said ad nauseum in the comments already but I was not emotionally ready for this chapter! After spending so long with the characters and getting to know them it feels kinda painful to see them suffer like this. If jonas gives Brett his voice and tits and Liam gets cunted I feel like I'm gonna go full Annie Wilkes lol - jokes aside I do trust and respect your vision, and will be awaiting the next installments - though I'm almost scared to read on

3/16/22, 12:39 PM
@silverstat LOL ;- ) SLIPPED AWAY! SLIPPED AWAY? HIS DICK DIDN'T JUST SLIP AWAY! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT TO MY LIAM!