Recent Comments

Ben
3/10/22, 1:40 AM
I like this story but in this chapter it repeats like 3 times, very confusing

3/17/22, 8:53 AM
@Ben The repeating scenes are a motif of the story, the exact same thing happens in chapter 2. That's how the story works.
Apr 22, 2019
PromethiumJPM
3/17/22, 8:11 AM
Oh My fucking Gourd! A DP so early on, gourds bless this sin! Im all in!
Martin
3/17/22, 8:06 AM
Thank you for this meta story! I've only scanned it so far, but I'm really looking forward to read and enjoy it fully later tonight :)
3/17/22, 8:02 AM
awwww, I love the dynamic between those 3. So sexy. Jack is doing a great job protecting and serving
3/17/22, 7:39 AM
ooooooh,that's a nice twist in the power dynamics. I like that,good chapter
PromethiumJPM
3/17/22, 2:38 AM
Goddamn, this story is hotness + Sexy as F
3/16/22, 11:46 PM
i thoroughly enjoyed this, particularly bringing him back to awareness. Well done!
3/15/22, 7:13 PM
Loved seeing a nonbinary character in this story! Very curious about what's going on with Ercole's new powers!

3/16/22, 10:18 PM
@time.to.occur Always happy to represent less commonly seen minorities in my stories. But... Ercole has no powers? He was hypnotized by the stranger to use the machine without realizing it and to happily uses it to tweak Anstice's personality. I know i write a lot of magic & powers stories, but this is pure science-fiction.

3/16/22, 11:02 PM
@BobbyBlobfish On my first reading, it wasn't completely clear to me how that had operated and what exactly he had passed onto him! thanks for clarifying.
3/15/22, 3:21 AM
I really enjoyed this, there was some grammar funkiness in the latter half but I appreciate more NB characters on this stories. I actually would wanna know where it goes next but I feel like it might be a closed ending. Also, do you know who the models are? like their names?

3/16/22, 10:22 PM
@TheSatanScully Didn't notice problems, besides me not knowing what term to use to describe a non-binary. I try to get variety in my stories. I am interested in what you though was weird. Having a NB was an idea I just didn't really knew where to put, and I realized it fit really well for this as i wrote it. And yes, it was planned as a one-off. Maybe I'll come back to it if i have an idea. But it's far from the only story I would just describe couple stuff if I wrote more, and I have a glaring lack of experience in that domain. And for the models... No, sorry. Pictures found on the net. The images I used for Ercole did have a name, though. Toni Mahfud. No idea for the other two, unfortunately.