You are not even doing the story and can't even check what you are publishing . . . I mean c'mon . . . > But users who turn 25 seem to disappear Didn't know "user" was a name 🤦‍♂️

The idea of ​​the story is good, but the implementation is unfortunately bad.

awesome chapter and story man, thank you!!

@[hmsl](/user/show/72172) I've been reading stories on this site without an account for at least a year now, but your story has hit me with so many different emotions that I just had to make an account to express to you my feelings. This was such a vividly written piece that I, even suspecting that I have aphantasia, felt like I was experiencing every scene in the story in real life. And you've beautifully tackled a lot of very relatable themes that I would have not expected from a site for hypnosis erotica: parallel universes, childhood trauma, domestic and workplace abuse, unfulfillment in life, existentialism, the search for happiness, hidden desires, living a different life and the freedom from societal pressures. And the ending was, for me, a melting pot of strong emotions: elated that Harold and Jonathan broke the shackles that tethered them to their past abusive lives and became the people they always wanted to be; sorrow that the past Harold and Jonathan, with the memories of their journey, were essentially wiped out from existence, for better *and* for worse; but also the sweet, sweet feeling of revenge from knowing that Esther and Preston will suffer a steep fall from grace when they can no longer exploit Harold for all he's worth. You've even made me feel a little jealous (in a good way) and wanting to become Brock myself, or have a friend like Brock! Your excellent writing has brought me deep into an introspection of myself and my own journey through life in the past couple of days, and it has left me yearning over our short lifespans relative to everything I wish I could be or do, especially when I feel like I've already lost two decades of my life, although through little fault of my own (I have late-diagnosed autism, ADHD, and social anxiety). But it just gave me all the more motivation to push forward while I'm still relatively young to be the person that I want to be, and be free from regrets in my later years. It's a damn shame to see that this story seems to have fallen under the radar, because it really is an amazing piece of writing. Bravo mate, and thank you for all the effort that you've put into this story and bringing us along for the journey! :heart:

Bravo ! Il faut poursuivre, en plus pour une fois que c'est en français. Tu te fais aider par une IA ? Sinon côté modifications tu pourrais aller plus loin en les rendant accros au muscle, à la muscu voire aux stéros. Mais bravo encore, continue comme ça.

Espero mucho leer el siguiente capítulo. Me encanta lo caliente que te está quedando.

Can't wait for what's next :)

I love this. It’s whimsical and funny and sexy and even raunchy. Thanks for the Paddy offering 🌈☘️

Please continue this at least for a while until maybe Chapt 8-10 or something to make it a fully developed story. Maybe u can make some chapters that stand alone….would love to c what happens w/ the person using the love potion….

Me encanta esta historia, ya quiero leer mas sobre Jay y como domina al siguiente hermano