Recent Comments

3/15/22, 8:05 PM
excited for chapter 3. Hopefully they start going to Zeus for more intense training. Becoming big burly himbos with little to no higher brain function. All they know how to do is fuck, suck, workout, eat and sleep.
3/15/22, 4:19 PM
This has quickly become one of my favorite stories in the site, it's so incredibly hot!! I love how oblivious they are to the changes and how gradual it's been. Something about the way you write makes them feel very real, excellent work!

3/15/22, 7:06 PM
Thank you so much @Luxor, you have no idea how happy I am to hear you say that :D
Evan
3/15/22, 3:32 AM
Really enjoying their cluelessness and feeling good using a dildo for depth checking their squats... and more.

3/15/22, 7:06 PM
@Evan its unconventional but I mean you can't deny the results!
3/14/22, 5:29 PM
Very hot. Love the "its not gay we are just exercising" element. Zeus was cool. Also I can't help but think the curse sorts of gets others to not super focus on what is going on. Soo, can I ask for some buttplay. Like you can't have them look at each other's holes and not want to, I don't know, sniff, lack, finger, and maybe in the end fuck but especially the first two, it. Also I can't help but think they need a "master", especially a naturally gay guy, to help keep them bros on the "straight and narrow". Haha My one "but why" is the shaving. I guessi like hair too much for totally smooth to look super great. Hehe Honestly, great and secy chapter. The work out and "oops my hole sat on a dildo" element was super fun and sexy.

3/15/22, 7:05 PM
Hi @Heru Kane, nice to see you commenting again. I mean, who hasn't been innocently working out and fallen on a dildo XD. Don't you fret, you're getting a lot more explicit action in the next chapter which I hope you enjoy. There is definitely someone behind the scenes pulling the (thong) strings. Just who was that man who they stole the briefcase from? The shaving is just personal preference. I love watching bodybuilders pose on stage, the small the posing briefs the better, and they are all groomed to make sure that no unsightly hair sticks out.
3/15/22, 6:30 PM
Hoping for chapter 10 in the near future... I love this story so much
3/15/22, 12:20 PM
Seems like you're getting a bit of blowback from the fans about he harshness of the story lol. I trust where you're headed. Write the story you wanna write. If readers want a different story then they'll just have to write it themselves.

3/15/22, 6:25 PM
@tomtales Thanks appreciate the feedback. I really don't mind the "blowback". The fact that there is a lot of emotion around the story is really quite satisfying.
3/15/22, 5:25 PM
Gengoroh Tagame would be proud
Blakenikolas
3/15/22, 4:39 PM
god this story keeps getting better
3/15/22, 3:30 PM
GREAT Story dude. Loved the plot twist ending, watching him fail on such a stupid horny thing. Fucking hot as hell.
hairyartist
3/15/22, 12:56 PM
HOT thank you!

Rubber_Lover14
3/15/22, 1:10 PM
@hairyartist no problem. I hope you enjoyed reading the story as i did writing it. I'm very curious on what ill come up with for part 3. if you have any suggestions, please don't be afraid to let me know