Recent Comments

Blakenikolas
3/15/22, 4:39 PM
god this story keeps getting better
3/15/22, 3:30 PM
GREAT Story dude. Loved the plot twist ending, watching him fail on such a stupid horny thing. Fucking hot as hell.
hairyartist
3/15/22, 12:56 PM
HOT thank you!

Rubber_Lover14
3/15/22, 1:10 PM
@hairyartist no problem. I hope you enjoyed reading the story as i did writing it. I'm very curious on what ill come up with for part 3. if you have any suggestions, please don't be afraid to let me know
hairyartist
3/15/22, 12:25 PM
very hot, thank you
hairyartist
3/15/22, 12:01 PM
Thank you Jack
3/13/22, 6:18 AM
When I commented the last time, you said there was a happy ending. I sure hope it starts turning up soon. I'm reading because, yeah, I love the work. But also, man, it's so dark and dreary and makes me sad. Which, I guess, is good. But also not what I'm on here for. 'Bout how many chapters is it before things get upbeat, if I may ask? I'll binge them all to get through the sadness porn.

3/13/22, 8:41 AM
@Lancelot feels like bdsm without the aftercare. strangely feel myself growing numb to it. Still excited to see how it goes.

3/13/22, 10:16 AM
@Lancelot 7 parts total. There are still a few... less than happy things to get through after this, but this is definitely the lowest point in the story. You need the sad so the happy has meaning. (I've been helping out with some concepts and editing, so I've seen the ending and I don't think you'll be disappointed.)

3/13/22, 4:08 PM
@Flamefox23 Yeah. It's a bit of that, thanks for putting a finer point on it than I could've when I first commented.

3/13/22, 4:09 PM
@Lloyd Irving Alright. I'll buy it. I just need to see SOME happy again. Because for a little while it has basically been a downward spiral with very few upbeat moments, which makes it seem more like the light at the end truly is a train than anything else.

easdf
3/13/22, 11:34 PM
@Lancelot I agree. The story is really interesting but it's just one heartbrake after the other. It gets a bit disheartening to keep on going . I'm too invested in the plot to quit now, but damn this is getting a little too dark. Especially since you need to stir for a whole week until you might get a tiny glint of hope

3/14/22, 6:20 PM
@easdf Yeah. It's very well-written. But, the concern of how much more darkness there is, is one I'm mirroring with you as well as some others. I want to see some hope here. But lately it's just... really rough. And my only personal hope is that the one doctor gets what's coming to him, after 'taking care of' both Brett and Liam.

easdf
3/14/22, 11:03 PM
@Lancelot I completely agree. Something tells me that Liam won't become a full on breeder, maybe he'll stop at his current state (since it would fit the versatile vibe we got from him until this chapter), but other than that I am full on with you

easdf
3/14/22, 11:22 PM
Though upon a second reading of my reply I realize I got off point

3/15/22, 12:16 AM
@easdf All the points above are perfectly valid and understood. Part 5 marks a shift in the narrative. I am not promising all sweetness and light but this is the pivotal moment in the story. I do undsertand it won't be for everyone but I wouldn't give up just yet if you care about the characters.

easdf
3/15/22, 8:23 AM
@Speedychopslover I'm glad to hear! Don't worry, I'm not going to give up on the story, it is captivating and very well written. It's just that we want some hope and assurance that it will be okay at the end.

Martin
3/15/22, 9:52 AM
@Speedychopslover It was a hard read. And I'm certainly NOT giving up. I have to admit that I scanned over the second half of ch. 5, because I couldn't make myself to read what happens to Liam and Brett in every detail. I guess, after we know how it will all turn out in the end, I might come back to this chapter and read it again. It might be easier then. That's the problem if your readers are an empathic bunch... They're hard to please :)
3/24/21, 9:15 PM
Not into watersports myself but loved the ending of this story! It worked perfectly!

PromethiumJPM
3/15/22, 8:24 AM
@absman420, brother i agree! i get the breeding through his step dad and son, the water, condensed as piss and delivered in the body's unique purest opportunity, its the best story line!
Jack
3/15/22, 8:03 AM
Hey, Author! I know it can be hard to keep writing a series, especially when it seems like not a whole lot of people are interested. But I am! I think this story is hot and unique! I'd love to read more, if you find the courage to write.
3/15/22, 7:45 AM
Very hot! So excited to see where this goes and how Dylan struggles to learn his new role ;)
3/15/22, 5:38 AM
This is my favourite story on this site. I'd love another installement.