Recent Comments

3/14/22, 4:00 PM
Great. Wish it had continued.
Toonbear
3/14/22, 3:49 PM
hope there's a part 2 to this. Wonder if James might have some karma coming his way of if Andy will just become more of a slut
Evan
3/14/22, 6:32 AM
This was a great story. Well written, great pacing, unexpected events and hot hypnosis and enjoyment. Loved it!

3/14/22, 3:16 PM
@Evan Thanks!
3/14/22, 2:05 PM
I hope to see more, like them using the magic to change things around their apartament building and workplaces
3/14/22, 11:31 AM
If they have nore speedos, zeus could get one

3/14/22, 12:51 PM
@darkblade2814 spoiler alert but you will definitely be treated to Zeus posing flexing in authentic bodybuilder posing briefs.

3/14/22, 1:28 PM
@GoonNoob since the previous chapter did not mentioned how many speedos the briefcase had, I think they will give away some of them, I hope Zeus gets one

3/14/22, 1:53 PM
@darkblade2814 At least 20 thongs but no rule that they can't go out and buy more! I doubt that any of those thongs would fit Zeus though. He is a big, beefy man.

3/14/22, 2:01 PM
@GoonNoob I see, so for Zeus in particular, they would need to get a bigger one, assuming he wasn't already caught off-scream and we don't know
3/14/22, 1:04 PM
great story. Please continue. Really love this type of tale.
3/14/22, 12:32 PM
Hoooooooooo BOY this was good. Exercise routine infomercials were how I first realized I was gay (hello, Bowflex!), so a workout scene hits all my buttons--and we got two! The characters remain great, and their slow transformation into himbos is fantastic. Finally, I love stories that explore that weird space of "it's not gay with your bros"--the tendency of straight men to justify sexual behavior in a non-sexual way. Fantastic all around!

3/14/22, 12:54 PM
thanks for your comment @Feed Your Head, really appreciate the positive feedback. I'm really interested in seeing how far I can push these two and have it still be 'not gay'.
3/13/22, 11:06 PM
This is horrifying, fascinating, and obliquely arousing, all at once. I'm definitely enjoying each new discovery, and am rooting for these two!

3/14/22, 12:35 PM
@NeedControlling Thank you! That's a lot of different emotions and reactions. Wonderful to hear my writing could evoke such responses to varying degrees.
3/14/22, 12:08 PM
No no no no! Come back Tony! Your daddy needs to take your virginity. God I love this story but I'm seriously irritated with how teasing it is. SOMEONE needs to lose their cherry for god's sake.

3/14/22, 12:27 PM
@RedShifter It's coming! I promise! The current plan is to visit each family before the butt fuckery begins in earnest. That means there's only 1.5 families to go! And I actually think that there might be some peripheral anal in the Pratt family scenes, so hopefully that will help bridge the gap, so to speak.
Anonymous
3/14/22, 9:50 AM
I think I've developed a crush on Brock. Thick beefy blonde rugby playing guys are hot! Love the power dynamics between the two - Brock's better bod vs Jason's bigger bulge.

3/14/22, 10:51 AM
@ Brock is very cheeky and mischievous but also an innocence about him while Jason is more bold and able to rationalize what's happening to them. Both are gonna be superb himbo bros together.