Recent Comments

3/12/22, 2:48 PM
Wow! OMG! Every time I thought I had the story figured out, there was a new layer. Amazing. The first time, I enjoyed all the surprises, the second time, I enjoyed all the bread crumbs you gave us along the way. A MASTERPIECE!!!!

3/14/22, 12:43 AM
@Unruly Dogboy Thanks!
boy Ed
3/12/22, 1:24 PM
I LOVED this story. Most stories on this site seem to be completely outside the realm of possibility. However, this story seems completely possible and I truly appreciate it. Great job and I look forward to reading the next chapter!!!

3/14/22, 12:43 AM
@boy Ed Thanks!
DD
3/12/22, 1:21 PM
Woof, this was a really good read. I hope you are going to explore these characters more, I'd love to see the tables turn on William, if that's in the cards.

3/14/22, 12:43 AM
@DD Thanks! After you said this quite a few other people have made a similar comment. I might have some ideas to continue it...
3/13/22, 10:56 PM
Wow, turnabout x2! And hot to boot 😏😛😛😛

3/14/22, 12:41 AM
Thanks, @NeedControlling
Martin
3/13/22, 9:52 PM
I'm not really into puppy play, but this story is really great! I loved every second, I loved the twists, it's really a combination of a hot wank story and a witty intriguing read. Not sure if I understand that final twist in the last sentence though. Maybe too much of my blood is down there instead of in my brain...

3/14/22, 12:39 AM
@Martin well it's revealed that the end that Mitch, who William used to lure in Perry, is actually known to Jonas. Did they meet afterwards, or did Jonas know him before Perry went over to the house? ho is really out to control who?
3/14/22, 12:22 AM
Very fun and sexy. Personally I don't really like it when people or cocks get shrunk, or people get made fat. So I would have enjoyed the story more if Yusef had just turned into an elf (maybe a slutty twink elf) and was still dwarfed by his cousin being 7 ft tall. But that's just my personal preference. s far as example of computer rewriting reality it's pretty good
3/14/22, 12:12 AM
Don't feel like you need to upload so frequently! If you need to take time for yourself, do it. This isn't a job, but a passion. Focus on your own well-being before anything else. Hope you are better. But if you're not, breathe and focus on something else. Talk to friends, or family if they are supportive with respects to what you may be going through. Let this week treat you better than the last!
3/13/22, 11:43 PM
WILL YOU PLEASE STOP BREAKING MY HEART?! This chapter was really interesting but it was also brutal. To see your friends, those you were kind to become true assholes is alarming. I'm also not completely convinced that if Liam will become a bull again he would not become toxic as before. I can also see why even with all the love in the world Brett will still feel inferior and that breaks my heart even more. I'm not going to lie, knowing that there are three more chapters worries me that the good part is still far ahead and that is depressing. Angle is definitely my favorite character in this story, being the responsible and functioning adult. Please let the happiness start in the next chapter. True happiness, even if there are obstacles on the way. (and let this story end with a revolution)
3/13/22, 9:43 PM
I'm actually happy with this ending, they were both able to get something from the dom/sub dynamic but they were able to realise that it wasn't good for them. A great story will defiantly be reading your other story and any stories that may come after that.

3/13/22, 10:53 PM
@Bunny0Boi Aww thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. Great to have you on board, and hope you will enjoy reading my other stories too.
3/13/22, 7:54 AM
If Jonas isn't convicted of the murder plot and turned into a breeder I will scream. What a total bastard. He must be punished!

3/13/22, 12:44 PM
@Cutlerfan I don't want you to scream. I hadn't really anticipated how emotional readers would get by the characters. I can assure you none of the antagonists get away with their misdeeds.

3/13/22, 10:13 PM
@Speedychopslover You did a great job of depicting their humanity during very unusual transformations.