Recent Comments

3/14/22, 3:57 AM
too much permanent brutalisation of the bodies and egomaniacs winning out. i dont know if i want to invest more time in this..
Anonymous
3/14/22, 3:36 AM
I remember reading your stories back on tumblr so glad youre revisiting this series. Your stories get me so hard!
3/14/22, 2:40 AM
This is a great story. Take all the time you need and be well.
Anonymous
3/14/22, 2:15 AM
Fantastic story! Loved it!
3/13/22, 7:51 AM
Woof! One of the best stories I have read. I hope there will be a sequel.

3/14/22, 12:44 AM
@Whitegloves Thanks!
3/12/22, 9:15 PM
I really hope this is the start of a series! Solid characters, great scenario!

3/14/22, 12:44 AM
@PTutius27 Thanks, I did spend quite a lot of time crafting it, so it's good to know it was time well spent.
3/12/22, 2:48 PM
Wow! OMG! Every time I thought I had the story figured out, there was a new layer. Amazing. The first time, I enjoyed all the surprises, the second time, I enjoyed all the bread crumbs you gave us along the way. A MASTERPIECE!!!!

3/14/22, 12:43 AM
@Unruly Dogboy Thanks!
boy Ed
3/12/22, 1:24 PM
I LOVED this story. Most stories on this site seem to be completely outside the realm of possibility. However, this story seems completely possible and I truly appreciate it. Great job and I look forward to reading the next chapter!!!

3/14/22, 12:43 AM
@boy Ed Thanks!
DD
3/12/22, 1:21 PM
Woof, this was a really good read. I hope you are going to explore these characters more, I'd love to see the tables turn on William, if that's in the cards.

3/14/22, 12:43 AM
@DD Thanks! After you said this quite a few other people have made a similar comment. I might have some ideas to continue it...
3/13/22, 10:56 PM
Wow, turnabout x2! And hot to boot 😏😛😛😛

3/14/22, 12:41 AM
Thanks, @NeedControlling