Recent Comments

3/12/22, 6:22 PM
I've been looking forward to the next chapter of this saga for over a month..As I previously mentioned,, I was a little disappointed by the last chapter as I was hoping for more corruption on the part of the Son hoping he'd become more like his drunken Dad & was not expecting Tanner to 'clean-up' the Father! But, I respect the fact that the author knows what he wants to say...This current chapter is very well written [as alway's], but something of a tease, as there wasn't a hint of sex..I just hope that orange-cat isn't going to screw things up. It's time for Tanner to get back and change some of the boy's & their folks 'ideas' dealing with Father's & Son's....Was hoping for some more sexy moral corruption....Only hope we don't have to wait quite so long for the next chapter....
Bobjones
3/12/22, 6:15 PM
so fucking good. can't wait for more
Anon
3/12/22, 6:05 PM
Very glad to see another chapter in this series. I'm looking forward to more.
3/12/22, 5:58 PM
Another great chapter! Thanks for keeping this story going. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
3/12/22, 5:40 PM
I really enjoy the series. Great writing. Hope you're having fun writing this as I would love to see where this all goes.
3/12/22, 4:16 PM
Nice although rooting for a confrontation with the old Matt and Dr. Brown. However Dr. Brown's presents has been mostly absent lately.
3/12/22, 3:25 PM
Oh. You're such a tease!!! An excellent chapter but far, far to short of course. The Pastor is by far the best part of this story. This is a perfect example of all the small cracks that are forming in his personality. His increasing difficulties upholding the image of a proper pastor as his inner thoughts keeps drifting away to more sinful things. I especially liked the ending with him imagening the Russos' kissing eachother. It seems that his perversion has deepend. It is no longer just thoughts of his own son that gets him hard but lustful thoughts of fathers and sons in general that does the trick.
3/12/22, 2:34 PM
This is a nice tease for what is coming. Can't wait
3/12/22, 2:05 PM
still my favorite story. hope more is coming from this.
3/12/22, 1:21 PM
what a great chapter . i understand leoscurse's concerns as some here will get offended by bestiality but then i say dont read it . the intimacy at the end was a great addition to this story line so keep it going . And you are right , exploring ones fantasies can be fun

3/12/22, 1:58 PM
@Bimarguy Aww thank you for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed the intimacy. Yes, I wanted to be a bit careful regarding possible bestiality and consent as Max becomes less and less human and more dog. At this stage, he's a hybrid but still very much capable of his human thoughts and expressing himself as a human through speech, etc. so the intimacy and sex scenes are appropriate. If he hadn't been able to talk, etc. I think that may have been inappropriate. Not to shade anyone who might enjoy those types of stories (furries, anthros, etc.) as your tastes are completely valid but it wasn't personally what I was going for in this situation. Yes, I think you are right, we all have the choice in what to read which is the great thing about the diversity of online platforms for story-telling, whether that's for erotica or otherwise, there's something for everyone! :) Thanks again for reading and commenting.