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3/12/22, 4:16 PM
Nice although rooting for a confrontation with the old Matt and Dr. Brown. However Dr. Brown's presents has been mostly absent lately.
3/12/22, 3:25 PM
Oh. You're such a tease!!! An excellent chapter but far, far to short of course. The Pastor is by far the best part of this story. This is a perfect example of all the small cracks that are forming in his personality. His increasing difficulties upholding the image of a proper pastor as his inner thoughts keeps drifting away to more sinful things. I especially liked the ending with him imagening the Russos' kissing eachother. It seems that his perversion has deepend. It is no longer just thoughts of his own son that gets him hard but lustful thoughts of fathers and sons in general that does the trick.
3/12/22, 2:34 PM
This is a nice tease for what is coming. Can't wait
3/12/22, 2:05 PM
still my favorite story. hope more is coming from this.
3/12/22, 1:21 PM
what a great chapter . i understand leoscurse's concerns as some here will get offended by bestiality but then i say dont read it . the intimacy at the end was a great addition to this story line so keep it going . And you are right , exploring ones fantasies can be fun

3/12/22, 1:58 PM
@Bimarguy Aww thank you for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed the intimacy. Yes, I wanted to be a bit careful regarding possible bestiality and consent as Max becomes less and less human and more dog. At this stage, he's a hybrid but still very much capable of his human thoughts and expressing himself as a human through speech, etc. so the intimacy and sex scenes are appropriate. If he hadn't been able to talk, etc. I think that may have been inappropriate. Not to shade anyone who might enjoy those types of stories (furries, anthros, etc.) as your tastes are completely valid but it wasn't personally what I was going for in this situation. Yes, I think you are right, we all have the choice in what to read which is the great thing about the diversity of online platforms for story-telling, whether that's for erotica or otherwise, there's something for everyone! :) Thanks again for reading and commenting.
3/12/22, 1:12 PM
Mav is ready for more.
This Can't Be Happening
3/11/22, 9:14 PM
Huh. I've actually been watching this show over the last few months (this and the other Sam Raimi syndicated shows, they're absolutely phenomenal trash TV,) so this is weirdly timely for me considering it's based on something that came out in '08. This is really fun, can't wait for more! Side note, it's kinda funny that so far this is only a LITTLE more sexual than the episode. Not trashing your writing by any means! More of a "how on earth did this air on regular TV?" kind of thing.

3/12/22, 8:43 AM
I completely agree 🤣😂 Every time I watch it I'm like... How was this allowed? The whole episode is so sexually charged. @This Can't Be Happening
3/12/22, 8:32 AM
thanks for the hot update! keep in writing this, its AMAZING!!!!
3/12/22, 8:02 AM
so good! cant wait for more
3/12/22, 5:44 AM
You're an excellent writer! If you wrote the phone book, I would find it interesting!