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Frank
3/9/22, 7:33 PM
I wish Polter would own me and make me do all the things he made Blake do even though I don't want to do them.
hairyartist
3/9/22, 7:27 PM
Thanks Man, Hot!
Ben
3/9/22, 10:34 AM
Man this was a hot one! Loved how crazy the world was haha.

3/9/22, 6:25 PM
Thanks @Ben! Anytime I can make a clown explode into a cloud of goldfish... that's a fun day.
toy #4
3/9/22, 4:09 AM
Cool. The first Gear & Uniform story. Here's hoping there will be more.

3/9/22, 6:01 PM
@toy #4 me too!
3/8/22, 8:50 PM
He may have been the first Marine that you fucked. I know he wasn't the last, Jack.

3/9/22, 6:00 PM
@mjkuhl not by a longshot lol
3/9/22, 3:31 PM
As much as I don’t believe this is the way things work, it’s awfully hot to fantasise that it does. Exceptional as always—your writing never fails to please, and your trademark never gets old.
3/9/22, 12:16 PM
This was such an achingly sweet story in the best possible way -- all of that need and yearning, with Levi unable to deny his need for cum or his need for romance. Like other folks, I thought your writing of Levi as a trans guy was great rep -- respectful, hot, appreciative but not creepy in a chaser way -- it was just a feature of him to celebrate and enjoy. Great buildup and great handling of time -- I thought your time compression was very well-handled in the relationship because the question really was whether Peyton would be affected by the pheromones. Beyond that, I think you hit some excellent sweet snapshots of their courtship. Actually, for me, the one thing that made me pause was the off-handed mention of the cause of Levi's blessing. It was a moment of "What the hell kind of ritual did *his parents* do to make this happen?" -- without further context of whether it was a botched ritual that was meant to do something else or whether something else was going on, it felt a little out of place. This story was so, so lovely. Thank you for sharing it.

3/9/22, 2:46 PM
One of the things I most wanted to communicate was that tension for Levi—if I failed in the emotional department in this story, that would have been a failure for the story as a whole. I’m excited that it’s really hitting and that people find it as sweet as I hoped! The focus on that tension is what tightened the pacing up especially at the end, so I’m glad it wasn’t problematic—I was trying to be highly purposeful, and not include elements just because I thought they would be cool. Which is really, really hard! But ultimately I had to cut my plan for a montage scene across their courtship. That mention of his parents is purposeful—there are other elements to this story that I plan to unfold across other stories on this site. In fact, in one that I’m writing right now… once you find out the author of this story, keep a lookout! Thanks so much, again. To have this story called “lovely” is such an honour because it’s honestly what I’m going for, as much if not more than “hot”. (But I’m glad the “hot” got in there too!) @time.to.occur

3/9/22, 3:12 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I'll look forward to that! Really excellent work 🌈✨
3/9/22, 2:27 PM
loving every chapter and change, cant wait to see the frat party and if Galen ever finds the amulet!
3/9/22, 1:45 PM
good then i look for next chapter , i do like where it is going
3/9/22, 12:29 PM
now its getting better hehe . i also was wondering if maxs cum has an effect , but am also interested in what if any role thiago hasd in this , or others at station

3/9/22, 1:40 PM
@Bimarguy Glad you're enjoying the new chapter! Yes, we will explore these aspects more in the coming chapters. :)