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3/9/22, 12:25 PM
need new chapters like yesterday. if jack ends up in BDSM leather or thinking he's a real dog im gunna loose my mind XD
boi98229
3/9/22, 8:23 AM
Perfect! The concept is one I haven't seen, so very original for me. The whole description of the process of transformation and power transfer was wonderful!! Mind control, seduction, and power exchange is at the heart of what I personally find so arousing. Thanks for a wonderful adventure!

Kyle Cicero
3/9/22, 11:23 AM
hi. Glad you like it. That was an oldie. Check out my other stories here, on Amazon, or telemachus12.com@boi98229
3/9/22, 11:20 AM
it is so hot... I always look forward to your stories
3/9/22, 7:53 AM
Really enjoying your story's development! 😛😛

3/9/22, 10:39 AM
@NeedControlling Thank you so much. I appreciate the feedback!
3/9/22, 7:31 AM
will be interesting to see if Max's cum has any effects on Thiago...

3/9/22, 10:37 AM
@Readytochange Interesting point! We shall see, maybe, maybe not. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Anonymous
3/9/22, 10:01 AM
super fun story! i love giving the guys big chests and sensitive nipples!
3/9/22, 9:47 AM
easily one of my favorites now. Please make him a slave and more orders coming! Hopefully this won't be romantic to have a different ambiance. Thank you for another amazing piece!
Anonymous
3/9/22, 8:16 AM
I live to serve the Virus.
3/8/22, 10:08 PM
Jay-sus, what a good read. Very tender and sweet. And blisteringly hot. I love how you left so many details unspoken, like where the curse came from, why cinnamon fixes it, why nobody reacted to or needed explanation about the curse, why Levi's parents can 'lift' it or whatever it was Peyton alluded to... just very nicely done and had a lovely, lived-in feel from top to bottom. (ba-dum *tsss*) From a writing perspective, I'd try to find a few more alternate adjectives - you used the word 'pleasure' a lot towards the end, which mildly jarred me out of the fantasy. I'm also dying for more details on their courtship, which for my taste was a litte glossed over. Overall, I loved it. Reminded me a lot of Frecklman64's *Curse of 100 Bottoms* story, which also was such a sweet blend of romance and magically induced need-to-fuck-right-now horniness. Fantastic work!

3/9/22, 6:54 AM
Ahhh, this is such a glowing review! Thank you very much. I do try to make my worlds so full and real that I can write in it and people can feel happy to just experience it, even if not everything is explicitly stated. I certainly don’t want to confuse anybody. I wish I had done more on the courtship, but it was already getting so long, and I felt like everything else was so necessary too—but I do have a follow-up planned for Levi and Peyton, and I wonder if I shouldn’t start with their courtship, and the shenanigans Levi got up to satisfying his heats while waiting to come around, before moving into the rest of that plot. We’ll see! I might have to check your recommendation out. Irresistible-horniness is one of my biggest kinks on this site, and I’d dig some more, even if I’d pity they there’s no cum inflation. Overall I’m so glad you were into it this much! Thanks for reading, and for reviewing. @Noam de Pluma
3/9/22, 12:02 AM
Damn dude, you never miss with these.

3/9/22, 6:06 AM
@jockslut wow thanks man, super nice to hear