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3/17/25, 4:02 PM
love your work
Anonymous
3/17/25, 1:37 PM
This AI story is not good. I mean if you’re going to use AI, at least edit it after.
3/16/25, 8:49 PM
A great start into a very hot series of stories I hope.

3/17/25, 1:31 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks! This idea was one of the options that people could vote for in the Overcast series. It didn't end up being the winner for that, but I still wanted to put it out there.
HypnoSub
9/21/24, 9:27 PM
AHHHH, no way! I remember loving “Belching Your Brains Out” and wishing it was longer! I’m so happy you ended up continuing it and making it more of a slow-burn! The pacing of the transformation here is so well-done, I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. You did a really great job describing the dumbing down process and made it so hot to read. Any chance we’ll get more chapters in this series? 👀 No pressure, of course!

3/17/25, 11:47 AM
@HypnoSub Thank you so much. Glad this story hit for you like I intended. I can say that I have at-minimum 2 more chapters of this story planned. Each focusing centrally on a different character just like the first 2.

3/17/25, 1:22 PM
@[Anonymous Fox](/user/show/308354) That’s awesome to hear! I look forward to reading more of this series and any other stories you decide to post in the future!
HypnoSub
2/2/25, 4:31 PM
No way! I was actually just rereading “Belching Your Brains Out” earlier today, so I’m so happy you posted a new story! This ones awesome too. I liked the reveal at the end that Jaden actually didn’t have the bounces. That was such a surprise! I really hope you continue this series because I’m curious what happens to Jaden!

3/17/25, 11:34 AM
@HypnoSub Thank you so much, comments like this are huge for motivation. I'm sorry to say this is one story I don't currently have plans to continue. I may revisit The Bounces, but I'm unlikely to follow up on Jaden at least for a while.

3/17/25, 1:20 PM
@[Anonymous Fox](/user/show/308354) No worries! You have plenty other stories to enjoy, haha. And this also works really well as a stand alone story! Thanks for posting this and always coming up with really interesting stories (that are also hot as fuck, lol).
9/17/24, 7:42 PM
This was fun, amazingly written and really endearing. I'm not into dumbing down myself, but the idea makes me hard ... maybe if I tried it just for a weekend?

9/18/24, 9:51 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Oh a weekend trial would be awesome, just to see!

3/17/25, 11:53 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) You actually just gave me a new story idea so thank you for that.

3/17/25, 12:44 PM
@[Anonymous Fox](/user/show/308354) Now I'm REALLY excited ... I need to read what you're coming up with!
3/17/25, 12:30 PM
Oh wow! Very well written! I really liked it. It's a different story than the ones I usually read, but I loved it. I'm not sure if I would have preferred Peter being conscious in his frozen state, but it was really hot. Plus, him not being conscious is very convenient for the plot. I really liked that Peter's friend is quite caring and even affectionate toward Peter, even though he's unconscious and able to have complete control over him. It's adorable, and I loved it.
8/9/24, 7:07 PM
Soooooo hot! Please tell us you plan to continue.

3/17/25, 11:57 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you, and I do have future chapters planned.
8/9/24, 11:57 AM
This story is incredible! Very well written and I love the dynamics and developments. Can’t wait for more

3/17/25, 11:57 AM
@[Butterpecan](/user/show/1527212) Thank you very much!
wizzywod
9/30/24, 11:54 PM
Mmm, this is really good! I'd be interested in finding out more about how Kris is affected here. He obviously always had something for it judging from the boner in the first chapter, but is there more to it? Is he also receiving some kind of chemical or subliminal alterations to solidify his position as 'Top' in the new hierarchy? I'll be honest, I'd much prefer if this kept to monogamy, or at least one main relationship between them even in the end.

3/17/25, 11:57 AM
@wizzywod Thank you for prompting me to broaden the focus out a little to Kris too, made a difference in Chapter 4 for sure.