Recent Comments

Tyrol
3/7/22, 10:10 PM
This story has been hitting me so hard in my gender fluidity and I'm so emotional about it and all the characters. I want Brett to decide he loves being a breeder and i want him to be with liam and i want them to escape to Liam's home country and gender swap at will but everything you write is perfect so even if that's not what happens I'm sure I'll love it

Tyrol
3/7/22, 10:13 PM
also i really hope he gets fucked by

Tyrol
3/7/22, 10:14 PM
by Jonas*

3/8/22, 9:42 AM
@Tyrol Glad you are enjoying the story in the way you are. I have to say I loved writing these characters. Thanks for taking the time to feedback.
3/7/22, 11:03 PM
Your writing is absolutely fantastic man. Where have you been? I will likely read just about anything you write at this point. There is suspense, erotica, love, sex, the whole lot! Not sure how you're cranking in these long chapters but please keep going! I can't wait to read more!

3/8/22, 9:19 AM
@randy7869 Hi Randy glad you are enjoying the story. As for cranking out the long chapters. The story is written and has been for a few weeks. Each week my collab partner (LloydIrving) Helps me edit one section and then I publish it. So far that cadence is working. We may slip at some point but fingers crossed.
Aug 13, 2021
Anonymous
3/8/22, 7:20 AM
if you write another chapter i'd love to see a hot older stud (like a cop/marine/etc) made into a slutty pussy bitch. made to wear slutty panties, cock-cage, pussy plug, etc. maybe some sph (small penis humiliation) too
3/4/22, 8:16 PM
I loved reading this. It felt natural to read... I was almost tempted to pull out my own credit card when the story asked for it. ;)

3/7/22, 11:08 PM
@must obey muscle Everybody monetizes now! It annoys the hell out of me. Please make sure to buy my novel on [Amazon](https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09RVDXR7M/ref=tmm_pap_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=1643810153&sr=1-2).

3/8/22, 6:12 AM
@absman420 Yes Austin... I obey ;)
3/8/22, 5:05 AM
Loving it so far, can't wait to see what Brody and his dad get
Shadow
3/8/22, 4:11 AM
issue as mentioned above yeah but damn man. this story is such q cool and hot idea.cant wait for the next update!
3/3/22, 1:57 PM
Absolutely awesome story. I really loved the more "real world" and autobiographical style you used here as well as the sense of levity through. It was a nice change to read a story where the person getting hypnotised was a willing participant and to have a happy ending was pleaseantly refreshing. Here's hoping you do decide to add that extra scene at the end and that you might write more stories in this style in the future.

3/7/22, 11:06 PM
> @phillipsm as well as the sense of levity through > Humor is a hard element in erotica. Laugh out loud moments tend to break the mood, so a lot of times I satisfy myself with the "knowing nod" kind of joke. Glad you felt I succeeded.
Jake
3/7/22, 6:01 PM
Excellent installment and absolutely love Robin working his ass for all those in his mind who are admiring it!!
Jake
3/7/22, 5:57 PM
Love it!! The prefect takedown for the perfect hero. Looking forward to all 5 parts!! Especially ove how Robin's mind is slowly coming around/controlled to what his body obviously wants!!
slut
3/7/22, 11:02 AM
so so hot🔥

3/7/22, 5:39 PM
Hell yeah! Glad you enjoyed. I might make a couple more one-shots like this in the future, mostly on the side of sadism/roughness but with a heavy dash of romance. @slut