Recent Comments

Zai
3/6/22, 7:51 AM
The 2 🗝key🔑 words for me that epitomizes your intriguing tale are: mysterious and infatuation. Mysterious because from the get-go, we readers are led down a zig-zagging path that leads to ambiguous to no answers that leave us to treadmill our imaginations into over-drive. And believe you, me, my imagination has an over-abundance of hot filth and heat to fuel a power plant for many years. Infatuation is evident in three ways. Elliott's, Daddy's AND we reader's. First, Elliot is ensnared from the start with his benefactor, Mr. Masters, and as the story progresses, his inner boi, bitch, sub, etc, are completely owned by Mr. Masters; aka Daddy. Then there's the innocuous and delectable Mr. Masters. His character is never fleshed out with no true exposition or facts revealed. Thus, we readers are left opening our minds to just who is this man? What are his reasons for choosing Elliot? Etc, etc, etc! Thus, Daddy is just a tasty mystery man we become addicted to quite quickly. Yum! LASTLY, we readers are left infatuated with our Daddy and HIS boi. Although the story as a whole has several important plot points left utterly unanswered, we get to use our own ideas and plot bunnies to fill-in the unknown. And I truly think you did that on purpose. You clever Anon writer, you.. lol, lol! P.S. a sequel would be great! 🤔😛👅💓👀🔥

3/6/22, 7:57 AM
@Zai Thank you so much for such kind words! 😄
Evan
3/6/22, 6:20 AM
Awesome chapter. Nothing like some edibles to help ease the way. And Sean is on his way to enlightenment. Can't wait for more! Love your work.

3/6/22, 7:17 AM
@Evan thanks man!
Anonymous
3/6/22, 5:06 AM
I live to serve the virus.
3/6/22, 2:16 AM
Would love to see this go on, but it also exists at a perfect moment that does a lot of justice to their stories, dynamic and friendship. Bravo!

3/6/22, 4:54 AM
@Essex thanks man!
3/5/22, 5:14 AM
I love this story, but you're right. It definitely feels incomplete. I would love to commission a third chapter but I'm not currently able to - moving expenses and everything - but...hmm food for thought

3/6/22, 4:54 AM
@Some Guy it isn't going anywhere :)
Zero
3/6/22, 3:25 AM
oooh the corruption begins, im curious to see where this goes. looking forward to more.

3/6/22, 4:53 AM
@Zero thanks!
3/5/22, 9:36 PM
I love Sean's internal struggles and how he doesn't realize he's fighting a losing battle. Really enjoy the conflicted headspace.

3/6/22, 4:53 AM
@stimle thanks man!
3/6/22, 4:40 AM
The coach is doing a great job making Scott into a slave. I hope he gets more time in that latex suit as the coach increases his control over him.
jl
3/5/22, 6:46 PM
YES! You're back to writing this! I love this story so much, and your other one as well. Superpowers are so boring if you don't use them to have sex. Long time fan, been reading for years. Eagerly looking forward to what happens next. And the "first time" between Archie and Van was really sweet and hot at the same time.

3/6/22, 2:57 AM
@jl Thank you! I really appreciate that.
Anonymous
3/6/22, 2:47 AM
I really hope Brett and Liam end up together and get a happy ending