Recent Comments

3/5/22, 4:42 PM
Continuing to enjoy this story. The world-building is superb, and the characters are well developed. I liked getting to meet Marin in this chapter and would love to know more of the history between Marin and Rhys. Keep up the excellent writing!

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 6:01 PM
@Hypnoguy67 I'm really glad you're enjoying it! As a new author, it's very encouraging to see people's comments like this.

Anonymous
3/5/22, 6:05 PM
@Hypnoguy67 We already have a pretty clear idea of what Marin and Rhys's history is, and I am wondering how and if we could drop some hints about it in the future. I would personally love to get Marin and Jasper in the same room so Marin could tell stories about Rhys.

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 6:10 PM
@Hypnoguy67 The above message: "We already have a pretty clear idea of what Marin and Rhys’s history is, and I am wondering how and if we could drop some hints about it in the future. I would personally love to get Marin and Jasper in the same room so Marin could tell stories about Rhys." was from me, @Cuddle-switch, but it showed as if it was from anonymous for some reason.

3/5/22, 6:10 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're into the worldbuilding and characters. For me, a big goal for this chapter was developing more of who these people are, and especially trying to figure out what Marin is like after everything, ten years on.
DD
3/5/22, 12:33 PM
Nice start, love a good cumupence story, can't wait to see how Robin's mind gets twisted like a pretzel knot and his personality changed.

Kyle Cicero
3/5/22, 4:51 PM
Thank you. There will be five parts plus epilogue that I will probably post on every Sundays or Mondays@DD
Jun 17, 2021
3/5/22, 3:42 PM
quite nice! i keep coming back to this story cuz i keep finishing before finishing. but i actually read it all this time! it really is something special i think
3/5/22, 7:45 AM
very hot
3/5/22, 6:24 AM
would like to see some fisting and fetish action
3/5/22, 12:04 AM
Damn, I love this story.

3/5/22, 3:17 AM
@Beaner We love to hear it! Thanks for letting us know!

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 3:35 AM
@Beaner I'm really glad you're enjoying it -- we look forward to writing more and we really enjoy hearing people's thoughts on this!
3/5/22, 1:42 AM
i cant wait to see where this goes next
Buckyboi
3/4/22, 9:06 PM
Hmm... A mysterious gayted community dedicated to cultivating hypnotic himbos, and a sound more felt than heard that leaves your mind ... hazy? This sounds faintly familiar... 😜 Loved it!

3/4/22, 9:36 PM
@Buckyboi Doesn't sound familiar, no. 😉
Madoc Larkin
3/4/22, 5:28 PM
I liked it. I appreciate that you didn't take away the protagonist's curiosity or intelligence, just... redirected his ambitions. I also like how the focus stayed squarely on Elliot instead of showing too much about other people in the community... I didn't really care much about whether he got all the answers he wanted from the start.

3/4/22, 9:35 PM
@Madoc Larkin Thank you 😁 I'm glad people are enjoying it.
Mar 21, 2017
3/4/22, 8:25 PM
Would love to see more of this story!