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3/4/22, 10:41 AM
Love me a nice happy hypnostory like this.
slut
3/4/22, 10:36 AM
looking forward to part 3. i hope it's going to be a happy story though.
3/4/22, 9:23 AM
I really wanted to like this story, because the basic premise is right up my alley. But I found all the backstory and exposition at the beginning to be incredibly confusing (especially everything about the mysterious benefactor paying for the narrator's law school), and then we never actually got to see what was so "weird" about the gated community. We're told that the men there are himbos, but we're not shown it, and aside from Mr. Masters and the nameless guard, we never get to meet any of the men in the community. Not for me, although I can see how some readers would go crazy for all the "dominant daddy" stuff with Mr. Masters.

3/4/22, 9:58 AM
@Hypnothrill Interesting feedback, but I personally prefer the isolation. Elliot is alone, literally and emotionally, even when he looks in the mirror. The guard has no name for that same reason. Elliot doesn't understand what's going on with Law School, so it didn't make sense narratively to explain it. I don't mean this to sound snarky, I hope it doesn't come across that way.

3/4/22, 10:17 AM
Yeah, that makes total sense. I could see that you were more interested in telling the story about Elliot's internal conflicts and how they get resolved through his ultimate submission. It's just that the story description that got me to click promised a very different story, one that focuses on the gated community and the mystery surrounding it. When I didn't get that story, I was disappointed enough that I felt like leaving a comment.

3/4/22, 10:23 AM
@Hypnothrill Ah, I see your point. Expectation vs Reality is always a struggle.
3/4/22, 9:02 AM
very keen for the next chapter!!
3/2/22, 2:38 AM
martin, i agree with the comment complaining. This was a giant tease. very disappointing. And whether it's free or not, it gets critcism -- that's why someone publishes. Unlike you, O've been commenting as the story went along. O agree with anonmous and think he or she had valid comments. Don't be a cock tease when you are writing erotica.

Martin
3/2/22, 6:25 AM
@JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking I can't see any comments of yours under any of Henry's stories on this site. Unless you wrote them anonymously or with another account. Criticism is fine, of course, there's no point in having a comment section if we would have issues with negative criticism. But it's a matter of the general tone and angle of criticism. If it's written in a way to offend the author and to discourage him from writing again, it's not helpful at all. And I see Anon's criticism in that way, no matter how valid their issues may be. BTW, you can see that there are people enjoying the series a lot. Don't assume just because YOU felt unsatisfied with it, that it's not ok to publish a story the way that Henry did.

3/4/22, 1:19 AM
YOU WANT TO SPANK ME MARTIN? PUT ME IK N MY PLACE? @Martin

Martin
3/4/22, 6:20 AM
@JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking 😈
3/4/22, 5:19 AM
Oh boy I'm really liking how this story is turning into. I'm also glade that JD is helping his old friends out with their body's as well.
3/4/22, 2:35 AM
this was incredibly hot. I am looking forward to the further adventures of our young rogues and the teachers who suffer with/prey on them
3/4/22, 2:02 AM
This was unbelievably hot. I really wished I was in the shoes of Xander. Oh, and are you planning on having a gangrape take place? Maybe even multiple ones, because they're so crazy for Xander? And what do you think of Xander being forced to wear a chastity cage? That maybe Lucas nabs the keys for, so he's only allowed to cum via anal anymore.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
3/4/22, 12:45 AM
Every little boy needs a Daddy to guide him!
blankbot
3/4/22, 12:20 AM
Nicely done. Will there be more?