Recent Comments

3/2/22, 1:27 AM
One of the best stories I've read in a while... thank you so much for sharing!!!
3/1/22, 11:38 PM
keep going. this is a good story
3/1/22, 11:05 PM
This is such an amazing reboot! As the above commenter said, you've done an AMAZING job rounding out (tee hee!) Luke's himbo energy: he genuinely doesn't know what's going on, which makes the build-up interesting and fun. And after reading countless stories about LGBTQIA teens being in agony over their sexuality and lamenting it, I must confess it's nice to see someone who isn't angsty, just...clueless. And the casual attitude toward sexuality is equally fascinating (Sammy is attracted to guys and the team is cool with it) and deep (the "bros" probably claim they AREN'T gay even as they ogle Luke's ass, because "it's only gay if you bottom" and all such nonsense). An amazing look into the jock mind! :)

SC Walker
3/1/22, 11:14 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you so much for the comment! I'm glad you like the build-up and how clueless Luke is. Overall the story is very fluffy and will have a happy ending, but Luke will have to go through some struggles to get there. And yeah, my intention was that the rest of the team aren't gay, but Luke's ass is so divine even straight guys want to fuck it lol
3/1/22, 10:43 PM
Oh my, fans head, this was amazing. Super sexy. Nice little device. So much fantastic buttplay stuff.
Anonymous
3/1/22, 10:35 PM
i never comment on any stories but i cant resist for this one. ive been a fan of your writing from the works you posted on nifty and ever since i discovered it the JPS series has always been top tier. im absolutely loving how this reboot has been going so far and cant wait for the rest. i love the similarities as well as the differences between the original JPS to this reboot. its just as hot if not even hotter than the original already and i love the extra details we establish early on in this one. i really appreciate how naive Luke seems to be in this version and simultaneously how relaxed and openly attracted all the other jocks are to Luke and his "assets". Cant wait for Sammy's actions to open the floodgates for the rest of his buddies and possibly others outside their group. keep up the good work!

SC Walker
3/1/22, 10:41 PM
Thank you so much I truly appreciate such a detailed comment, receiving comments like this really helps motivate me to write. I'm glad you like all the extra stuff I've added, I feel like Luke and Sammy are more fleshed out now. And don't worry eventually Luke's teammates will get a shot at his bubble ;)
Feb 27, 2022
3/1/22, 8:58 PM
scary how real this is
Anonymous
3/1/22, 8:41 PM
This has always been a favorite story of mine. Glad you're resurrecting it and so thoughtfully. Any chance Brody might get his cock locked up maybe to "help" deal with him getting erections all the time or help him be ready for the championship?
2/22/22, 10:49 PM
dying for a new chapter!

3/1/22, 7:56 PM
@Kurtis311 Stay living! It's coming! And it involves a boat, a lawn mower, and a birthday cake.
2/22/22, 9:12 PM
Hi S.Q.Neemie. Any news on when the next chapter is ready? I am anxiously awaiting the next step in Tanners plan and I know others agree.

3/1/22, 7:55 PM
@Lytcom Hey, man, I'm very lucky to have you as a reader. I'm hopeful I'll have the next chapter (well, the next short transition chapter plus a full "story" chapter) up by next week. I've been moving and performing this last month and I haven't had near the time I've wanted for writing. Things are settling down now, though, so I'm hopeful to get back to it. I have the next 7 chapters mentally planned out and now it's just a matter of finding a moment to write. Thanks for sticking with me!
Jack
2/20/22, 8:49 PM
You've gotta keep doing this series, man! It's incredible. There's nothing on GSS quite like it, and I might actually die if I don't read about Devon learning how incredible it is to get fucked by his daddy's massive cock.

3/1/22, 7:52 PM
@Jack Aw, man, thanks! I hope you don't die if you have to wait a while on that specific scene. Next few chapters will focus on Tony's family. Keep reading, though, we're building up to the fucking, I promise.