When I first saw this story I thought I'll brief through it and just leave it. But your story is so genuinely interesting that ended up spending most of today just reading your story, and this is university exams season where time is precious. I just couldn't take my eyes off your story. There were times when I suspected he is going to turn out as a breeder, but as Liam told of his homeland I thought it was going to be a more happy ending story (looking at other comments you say that it will end happily, so I still have my hopes up). I think that the addition of Avon was great world building and emphasized how corrupt the system in Abilon is. I do hope that at the end they will move to Avon with equal rights and may whoever ends up with the pussy will still keep his body and his voice (I admit that the breeder tits are less my type but it's a matter of taste of course). Also I love that Angle is like the voice of reason. He is a true hero and deserves a good ending. TL;DR You did fucking great

**Incredible.** What you are doing here is unprecedented for free writing. You have spent such thought, effort, and energy on this that you should have published it instead perhaps. I have not gone to part 2 yet, looking forward to it in great anticipation, and frankly am enjoying each bodily change the breeders experience, and the Trigger event that causes it, exactly as is. Sucking = Voice change, Ejac = Tits. Love that! I am not sure exactly why this excites me the way it does. Psychology is in there somewhere. Because i am hard core gay i know, but my first and long time sex experiences were all with gen-u-wine female sex organs. Because you Couldnt possibly be attracted to cocks and balls, could you? That made you a cocksucking gay faggot queer (whatever the hell that was, it was obviously horrible perhaps poisonous...) so i started out punting on that infamous river, cosplaying a straight jock BMOC. It was so difficult, you can all probably imagine, but let me mention a couple of things. The smell of pussy made me gag. The more hair, the worse, although the less the better. I had to focus on not vomiting while fucking it, which would certainly have spoiled the moment. And when a she wanted me to eat her out, well that was a performance worthy of a Best Male Drama SAG. I am sorry and embarrased to admit that i used them to get my rocks off. That was pretty much it. That is a terrible inhumane thing. No one was mistreated, we were just flings and toys and fuck puppets, but eventually i couldnt take it anymore. It was too disgusting. Not the guilt. The act. Eventually He, i guess you might say my Bull, saw thru my disguise and made me His happy boy toy thank God. This story plays across me in such odd ways. For someone that doesnt care for 'cunts' the concept of a man having 3 of them, and being hairy and strong and picturing his dick head as a large clit, well why am i leaking as i read and write this then? I am also heavily into chastity caging myself as well, which may play a role, coincidentally having unlocked just yesterday from a 52 day lockdown. Extremely satisfied. That wont last however, and will need to be locked again eventually. Your writing style is clear and dialog is easy to follow almost all the way thru, very few tweaks needed. I think its obvious you built a back story world first and have a branching What If/How decision tree somewhere close by. That is always the base of great story telling. Also I appreciate tales that are not ALL just cocks and cunts and fucking and sucking excluding everything else including romance and tenderness. Right now, my own member is a shadow of its usual self, from its long unused status since early last January. I imagine it would look to you like its on its way to breeder clit state at this moment. Little shruggy sack, short nubby tip. Your story is coaxing it out of its slumber though! Can hardly wait for more!

I'm in literal pain waiting on chapter 10, please give us a treat!! Love this story so much ❤

The world building is really interesting. Kind of like the handmaid's tale, it comes off as fairly plausible that some extreme stuff like this might happen if suddenly a virus or something killed off all women. It really added another layer as we find out that Albion isn't like most of the rest of the world, but seems to be in a particular position of power as the producer of these important drugs. It's very interesting the implication that a lot of the breeder characteristics are not actually necessary for reproduction - the butt and mouth pussies for example, seem to just be extras that Albion wanted to create (rather than necessary side effects of growing a womb). And that everything about bulls seems unnecessary too. The world could've just been satisfied with a pill that simple gave men a womb and called it there, but some Albion extremists made this strange country instead because they could. Very dystopian, kind of makes me think of The Uglies series. I really enjoy the story, but I do kind of find the high concept quality and character development slightly at odds with the smuttiness. I want to get off on this story but can't quite figure out how to make it happen for me. I'm distracted by wondering what's going to happen.

thank you for the updates ! its a great story with a great mind manipulation plot !

Amazing work as always Derek, I loved it. Thank you for sharing!

"My type of porn is where the seemingly straight older muscle man is struggling with his attraction to the younger guy. The older man tries to not fall for the younger guy but in the end, he gives in and becomes the younger guy’s bottom. Unfortunately, not many pornos have that scenario, and it really is a shame." This, you put into words my fav kind of stories and the truth that there's little to it, thanks <3

Would definitely love to read more.

When are the services?

you are an amazing writer. keeps me thinking of the story days after.