Recent Comments

2/28/22, 12:10 PM
First chapter was great. I look forward to reading more of this one!
Kods
2/28/22, 11:27 AM
Wow...just wow. I mean I know we probably all saw it coming, but how we got here now that's the real kicker. I fall in love with these characters more and more.

2/28/22, 11:43 AM
@Kods Thanks. I know this is a kicker. I loved writing Brett. Even I was rooting for him. Damn. ;-)
2/28/22, 6:02 AM
I'm a bit unsure how to feel. On the one hand, I am enjoying this story quite a bit, from a character perspective and a sexual one. On the other hand, I was hoping for Brett to escape being made into a breeder, so that his and Liam's story could be more impactful. Of course, it's not too late for such a thing. But, that last scene was... pretty visceral. Still gonna keep reading, just gotta cross my fingers you have a plan.

2/28/22, 10:34 AM
@Lancelot There is indeed a plan. Without giving anything away the story ends on a happy note. It might not seem like that but it really does.
2/28/22, 3:35 AM
Simply phenomenal!! Love it! Sad that it happened to Brett but I do hope he winds up with Liam and they escape to Avon, or maybe revolutionize New Albion to be more like Avon!! MORE PLEASE!!!

2/28/22, 10:08 AM
@Ember Spoilers ;-) !!! Glad you are enjoying it.
Evan
2/28/22, 9:59 AM
Really love this story idea and eager for the next chapter. I wonder if they learned their lesson. Or something about themselves.
2/28/22, 9:55 AM
This story is so witty and well-written! I love it! Thanks for the story.
Anonymous
2/28/22, 9:06 AM
hot concept and story... have I missed part 2???
Harry
2/28/22, 8:34 AM
I really liked the story you know I would like to be Tyler in the first round when the game forced him to wear the sexy Halloween costume with the jockstrap and the butt plug and even if I wanted to take it off I couldn't
2/28/22, 8:12 AM
so happy to see a new josmith story! super excited to see this muscle daddy submit.
Anonymous
2/28/22, 4:08 AM
Amazing story. great writing and descriptions of beings Got me so horned