Recent Comments

2/27/22, 3:43 AM
Just caught this one! Hot. Add more. This could go a long way.
2/27/22, 3:00 AM
great work for a first story :) looking forward to more of your writing hope the coach joins in as another muscle bitch
Saccnt2
2/27/22, 2:04 AM
This is a really good story!
2/17/22, 1:30 AM
I really love this one. Hope there is a sequel sometime.

2/26/22, 11:31 PM
@Drake Nightstorm The part about Justin is super hot. I have gone back to that bit a few times now.
Anonymous
2/26/22, 10:49 PM
Hope there's more...soon. I really need more...
2/26/22, 9:10 PM
This is so hot. Can you incorporate more tiddy play and nip torture for the next chapter?
2/26/22, 4:46 PM
This is definitely in my top list now. For some reason, when I first read the original version of this, I didn't love it the way I do now. Thank you so much for the changes you made to this, now. Can't wait for more!!

SC Walker
2/26/22, 8:18 PM
@revenge88fics I'm so glad you appreciate the changes. I've worked really hard to improve as a writer, particularly in characterization. I feel like Luke is more three-dimensional now than just a caricature.
2/26/22, 7:44 PM
I missed this when it came out a year ago. Really enjoyed it. The illustrations too.
Zac
2/26/22, 7:13 PM
SO hot! I love a good dumbing-down himboizing. You know I'm gonna be on the lookout for pink walls!

2/26/22, 7:42 PM
Thanks @Zac! The paint colour I used for my accent wall is 'diva glam', but I imagine any shade of pink might be hiding the Pink World behind it.
2/26/22, 6:43 PM
Great story!

2/26/22, 7:40 PM
Thank ye' @Cutlerfan!