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Saccnt2
2/27/22, 2:04 AM
This is a really good story!
2/17/22, 1:30 AM
I really love this one. Hope there is a sequel sometime.

2/26/22, 11:31 PM
@Drake Nightstorm The part about Justin is super hot. I have gone back to that bit a few times now.
Anonymous
2/26/22, 10:49 PM
Hope there's more...soon. I really need more...
2/26/22, 9:10 PM
This is so hot. Can you incorporate more tiddy play and nip torture for the next chapter?
2/26/22, 4:46 PM
This is definitely in my top list now. For some reason, when I first read the original version of this, I didn't love it the way I do now. Thank you so much for the changes you made to this, now. Can't wait for more!!

SC Walker
2/26/22, 8:18 PM
@revenge88fics I'm so glad you appreciate the changes. I've worked really hard to improve as a writer, particularly in characterization. I feel like Luke is more three-dimensional now than just a caricature.
2/26/22, 7:44 PM
I missed this when it came out a year ago. Really enjoyed it. The illustrations too.
Zac
2/26/22, 7:13 PM
SO hot! I love a good dumbing-down himboizing. You know I'm gonna be on the lookout for pink walls!

2/26/22, 7:42 PM
Thanks @Zac! The paint colour I used for my accent wall is 'diva glam', but I imagine any shade of pink might be hiding the Pink World behind it.
2/26/22, 6:43 PM
Great story!

2/26/22, 7:40 PM
Thank ye' @Cutlerfan!
2/26/22, 5:36 PM
Very fun story. It reminds me of a cross between Baralai and Ethan White's pink fairy, though of course it still reads like a Derek Williams story, complete with "happy ending." As you mentioned above, i like that you took the classic "roommate turns gay" story and give it an imaginative twist. Makes it feel more unique. For what it's worth i think "heterosexual life partner" has its own TV Tropes page, which is where i know it from.

2/26/22, 7:40 PM
Thanks @BlindSeer0, I'm a fan of both those authors. I was just looking at Baralai's author page yesterday, wishing for a new story. I've blown so many loads to the Himringyo series.
2/26/22, 1:37 PM
Loved this, totally bonkers. I really enjoy how you try and stretch yourself with your stories and ideas Derek. Brilliant.

2/26/22, 4:41 PM
Thanks @Tattcub! I have a lot of fun playing. Honestly, the writing would get boring if I didn’t.