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2/28/22, 9:18 PM
I'm in literal pain waiting on chapter 10, please give us a treat!! Love this story so much ❤
2/28/22, 6:14 PM
The world building is really interesting. Kind of like the handmaid's tale, it comes off as fairly plausible that some extreme stuff like this might happen if suddenly a virus or something killed off all women. It really added another layer as we find out that Albion isn't like most of the rest of the world, but seems to be in a particular position of power as the producer of these important drugs. It's very interesting the implication that a lot of the breeder characteristics are not actually necessary for reproduction - the butt and mouth pussies for example, seem to just be extras that Albion wanted to create (rather than necessary side effects of growing a womb). And that everything about bulls seems unnecessary too. The world could've just been satisfied with a pill that simple gave men a womb and called it there, but some Albion extremists made this strange country instead because they could. Very dystopian, kind of makes me think of The Uglies series. I really enjoy the story, but I do kind of find the high concept quality and character development slightly at odds with the smuttiness. I want to get off on this story but can't quite figure out how to make it happen for me. I'm distracted by wondering what's going to happen.

2/28/22, 7:47 PM
@Dreamweavr Thanks for this feedback, constructive and considered. I will definitely check out The Uglies series. Most of the things I have written are smut. It started off as captions on Tumblr and then moved to stories on a blog. I have not written anything up till now that I considered good enough to share beyond the sandbox of my blog. Nothing I have written to date is of this length or as considered as this. My two favorite purveyors of smut are WIP Topping and ONIX. I love their work and never got off reading anything they wrote because I was always too involved in the plot and characters. Even now I can read BMOC over and over and still not get off but as a story I love it. Personally I prefer that. Don't get me wrong a good piece of outright smut is just as valid. Just to be very clear I am not comparing myself WIP or ONIX I am just trying to say I can relate to what you are saying and don't find it a bad thing at all. My guess would be that nothing in the up and coming parts will get you off. However, I do hope you tag along rather than come along for the journey. Thanks again for the feedback.

2/28/22, 8:00 PM
@Speedychopslover There are many reasons to read smut, and getting off is only one haha. I definitely respect doing it for the plot and for the characters. I will probably continue reading this story because it's really interesting and well written, though my preference is smut that's orchestrated with the intent of reaching a certain kind of climax. Thank you for the thoughtful response, and I totally respect that your motivations in writing/reading are different than mine.
2/27/22, 8:07 PM
thank you for the updates ! its a great story with a great mind manipulation plot !

2/27/22, 10:44 PM
@Sufan Glad you are enjoying it. Love that you get the mind control side of the story. The ratings on mind control are awful. I did expect that. However, I sort of hoped that more people would see that central character is brainwashed when we meet him. One of the themes of the story is how Brett escapes years of mind control to become someone we can really care about.

Tyrol
2/28/22, 7:43 PM
@Speedychopslover i love that aspect of the story! brett's character development is really great and also... kinda sexy? I'm very happy with whatever direction you go in but i was on the edge of my seat rooting for brett in the end, so sad for his poor fate. not that I don't love it anyway, but i cared enough about him that i felt bad for him too

2/28/22, 7:59 PM
@Tyrol I know alot of people will be sad about what happened to Brett. I was when I wrote it and am glad that comes across. I think it was the only outcome for the story I want to tell. I think you will like where this ends up.
2/28/22, 7:51 AM
Amazing work as always Derek, I loved it. Thank you for sharing!

2/28/22, 6:18 PM
Thanks @Growing Geek – I'm glad you liked it! The joy is in the sharing :)
2/28/22, 5:57 PM
"My type of porn is where the seemingly straight older muscle man is struggling with his attraction to the younger guy. The older man tries to not fall for the younger guy but in the end, he gives in and becomes the younger guy’s bottom. Unfortunately, not many pornos have that scenario, and it really is a shame." This, you put into words my fav kind of stories and the truth that there's little to it, thanks <3
2/28/22, 5:36 PM
Would definitely love to read more.
Feb 27, 2022
2/28/22, 5:31 PM
When are the services?
2/28/22, 3:50 PM
you are an amazing writer. keeps me thinking of the story days after.

2/28/22, 4:05 PM
@Flamefox23 Thank you so much. It is good to know that you are enjoying the story.
2/28/22, 7:40 AM
I feel so bad for Brett his manhood means so much to him. I hope eventually he is able to somehow get his manhood back. I'm hoping more comes soon!

2/28/22, 3:28 PM
@Pacific1757 I feel your pain. Next part will be up here next Sunday.
2/28/22, 3:12 PM
Finally, you're back! Great start can't wait for the next chapter