Recent Comments

2/26/22, 9:10 PM
This is so hot. Can you incorporate more tiddy play and nip torture for the next chapter?
2/26/22, 4:46 PM
This is definitely in my top list now. For some reason, when I first read the original version of this, I didn't love it the way I do now. Thank you so much for the changes you made to this, now. Can't wait for more!!

SC Walker
2/26/22, 8:18 PM
@revenge88fics I'm so glad you appreciate the changes. I've worked really hard to improve as a writer, particularly in characterization. I feel like Luke is more three-dimensional now than just a caricature.
2/26/22, 7:44 PM
I missed this when it came out a year ago. Really enjoyed it. The illustrations too.
Zac
2/26/22, 7:13 PM
SO hot! I love a good dumbing-down himboizing. You know I'm gonna be on the lookout for pink walls!

2/26/22, 7:42 PM
Thanks @Zac! The paint colour I used for my accent wall is 'diva glam', but I imagine any shade of pink might be hiding the Pink World behind it.
2/26/22, 6:43 PM
Great story!

2/26/22, 7:40 PM
Thank ye' @Cutlerfan!
2/26/22, 5:36 PM
Very fun story. It reminds me of a cross between Baralai and Ethan White's pink fairy, though of course it still reads like a Derek Williams story, complete with "happy ending." As you mentioned above, i like that you took the classic "roommate turns gay" story and give it an imaginative twist. Makes it feel more unique. For what it's worth i think "heterosexual life partner" has its own TV Tropes page, which is where i know it from.

2/26/22, 7:40 PM
Thanks @BlindSeer0, I'm a fan of both those authors. I was just looking at Baralai's author page yesterday, wishing for a new story. I've blown so many loads to the Himringyo series.
2/26/22, 1:37 PM
Loved this, totally bonkers. I really enjoy how you try and stretch yourself with your stories and ideas Derek. Brilliant.

2/26/22, 4:41 PM
Thanks @Tattcub! I have a lot of fun playing. Honestly, the writing would get boring if I didn’t.
2/25/22, 9:35 PM
Great story as always. One minor thing: It feels weird for a straight guy to use the phrase "my heterosexual life partner" about his roommate. it took me out of the story for a moment - which was a shame. I am sure you could have described their sexualities without using such an artificial and technical phrase.

2/25/22, 10:48 PM
Thanks @Lytcom. The phrase is a reference to a Kevin Smith movie and suggests some of the narrator's characterization.

2/26/22, 3:35 PM
Given I’ve seen those movies and remembered the quote, it worked perfectly to paint a picture of the character for me. @Derek Williams

2/26/22, 4:34 PM
Thanks @MonsterMash62! That’s always the tricky part about pop culture references. On one hand, I love that the shorthand works for some folks. On the other hand it pulled Lytcom out for a moment - that’s a tricky balance.
2/26/22, 3:41 PM
very hot love to see how this goes
rwriter51
2/26/22, 7:53 AM
So glad to see this story again. I read it maybe two years ago or so on Nifty, and loved then. I'm looking forward to more updates to our favorite jock pussy.

SC Walker
2/26/22, 3:26 PM
@rwriter51 This is actually a reboot/remake of my old story! I added a lot more and made the characters more complex.