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8/9/24, 11:57 AM
This story is incredible! Very well written and I love the dynamics and developments. Can’t wait for more

3/17/25, 11:57 AM
@[Butterpecan](/user/show/1527212) Thank you very much!
wizzywod
9/30/24, 11:54 PM
Mmm, this is really good! I'd be interested in finding out more about how Kris is affected here. He obviously always had something for it judging from the boner in the first chapter, but is there more to it? Is he also receiving some kind of chemical or subliminal alterations to solidify his position as 'Top' in the new hierarchy? I'll be honest, I'd much prefer if this kept to monogamy, or at least one main relationship between them even in the end.

3/17/25, 11:57 AM
@wizzywod Thank you for prompting me to broaden the focus out a little to Kris too, made a difference in Chapter 4 for sure.
8/8/24, 2:23 PM
Oh, my favorite is back

3/17/25, 11:56 AM
@[tomtales](/user/show/10001207) The idea I'm anyone's fave on this site is incredibly motivating for me, thank you.
8/8/24, 4:47 AM
Holy shiiiit this is pushing all of my bimboi buttons!!

3/17/25, 11:55 AM
@[scablevoled](/user/show/10000574) Very glad to hear, thank you for the comment.
ghostwriter
12/24/24, 2:57 PM
Amazing story and so well written! Hope to see more!!

3/17/25, 11:51 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) Thank you greatly! I can confirm now more is coming.
bee
10/20/24, 11:55 PM
That was one of the best story on this site! Are you going to write more weight gain stories?

3/17/25, 11:50 AM
@bee Extremely high compliment to be given (to the point where I can't agree, my own vote for best on this site might be Nupiter's Jackpot Bubblebutt), so thank you. I will definitely be writing more weight gain centric stories, including 2 more chapters of this one currently in the works.
9/22/24, 5:50 AM
Oh good LORD this was BRILLIANT. I was hard the whole time. You do such a brilliant job demonstrating the slow changes, and I love all of the references to how the whole of the U.S.A. is turning into a dumbed-down, big-bellied man’s paradise. It’s also fun to see some of the ideas from your recent non-fiction piece about the “dumbing” fetish in story form—having the main character be an opinion columnist was a great choice! What makes it work, for me, is that the lowering of men’s IQ doesn’t make them helpless or infantile, which pushes stories into sadness for me—instead it makes them totally relaxed and chilled out, happy to just live simply. Amazing story! :)

3/17/25, 11:47 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thank you very much!
11/30/24, 6:11 PM
The series is really hot! Just found the first story because it has less words.. and well needed to read the whole thing..

3/17/25, 11:43 AM
@[Chavvyluce](/user/show/10006621) Thank you very much. I promise no subliminals were overlayed on my stories to pull at the mind of readers and compel them to become addicted to my writing.
10/29/24, 6:09 PM
Hot, hot, fucking hot. Between this and Thinking Pink you are one of my favorite writers on here.

3/17/25, 11:40 AM
@[Woodrow Writes](/user/show/424421) Ah! That means so much to me, thank you. Very motivating to be told that.
10/23/24, 9:04 PM
Really nice. Read the whole series today. Want to see where this goes. How deep it goes for Kris and Heath, how wide it goes out into the world?! I hope Heath retains enough brain cells that he can still manage to be in the plot! Very hot!

3/17/25, 11:40 AM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) Thank you very much. Currently I'm mainly working on other stories but rest assured, I will be returning to this setting and to Heath.