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2/26/22, 5:01 AM
The ball pit was so clever! I always appreciate when authors try a totally unique "game" like that. Great work.

2/26/22, 7:41 AM
Hah, thanks @Jockboy Joe! I was trying to figure out what kind of things he’d run into and the ball pit is my favourite.
Evan
2/26/22, 7:30 AM
This has some great build up, uncertainty in for the main character in what is going on, and slow discovery of the changes he's experienced and their curse as well as how to enjoy them. Looking forward to seeing the continuation. Also send like Sammy had desires he's been trying to keep hidden from his best friend.
2/26/22, 5:21 AM
I'm so glad this story is getting a reboot! "Luke's First Appointment" remains one of my favorites, and I've always wondered what happened next. It will be exciting to see the new twists and turns! Oh, and I have to ask: is the Micucci/My-Coochie pun intentional? :p

SC Walker
2/26/22, 5:25 AM
@Feed Your Head It's going to take a bit to get there, but I WILL continue the story from Luke's First Appointment and show what happens between Luke and Coach Tom. Also, absolutely, I love puns lol
Jack
2/26/22, 4:04 AM
Author, you know that I love your stories. I've left comments about how much I love your stories. I regularly come back to your stories because they make me cum like crazy. So when I say that I really need you to continue this story (and Donkey Cakes), know that it's not because I'm upset. It's because I'm fucking desperate!

SC Walker
2/26/22, 5:24 AM
@Jack I will continue both!! This story already has 4 chapters written. And Donkey Cakes will eventually get finished, I promise!
2/26/22, 12:35 AM
Loved this story, Derek! A bit trippy, but extremely creative and very hot. I liked how the clown kept appearing to guide Smith and exploding into different creatures. All of your stories are very good, but the imagery makes this story one of your best.

2/26/22, 1:59 AM
Thanks @Hypnoguy67! Definitely trippy. Can you believe I was totally sober while I wrote this?

2/26/22, 3:28 AM
@Derek Williams, I have to admit that the thought did cross my mind that maybe you had some "assistance" in creating such a vividly detailed fever dream. Kudos again for your superb writing!
2/25/22, 11:10 PM
We can't use magic We don't have to use magic Just these fireproof roofies, this mind and memory and orientation altering vine, and our cum that will addict him and so on. See i am so resourceful This hurt through the pleasing event. Made stronger with dumb he-man and clever fae who don't even have to try. but then events proceed. Pleasing. Just... Hmm the thumbsucking. The scene description. And he-man's changing mind and feelings and how handles them. Interesting The process nice when taking time. Thanks for that. Pool time.
2/25/22, 9:05 PM
I loved this. Pink World is pretty trippy and when the clown made an appearance, I was expecting it to trigger my coulrophobia. However, bizarrely, that only added to overall story. Superb job.

2/25/22, 10:45 PM
Phew, I'm glad the clown didn't trigger it for you @Speedychopslover. Trust me – I didn't know the clown was coming until he showed up.
Apr 22, 2019
2/25/22, 10:14 PM
How did I miss this story? Thanks for posting it. My gooey cock thanks you too.
8/19/20, 12:37 AM
You know very little about the history of the WW2 and the history of science :(

2/25/22, 7:46 PM
I wasnt writing a history book @Tsakaur
1/7/21, 6:00 PM
Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. A fresh take on the old classic, but you could have "fleshed" this out a little. The story moves way too quickly.

2/25/22, 7:43 PM
thanks where are you from? @Body Odor