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2/21/22, 9:12 AM
great story loved the transformation

2/21/22, 10:14 PM
Thanks @Sentinel. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Anything you'd like to see in future stories?

2/22/22, 9:24 AM
@Lusty Stallion I love all your ideas, But would like to see a really arrogant straight man with an above average cock size slowly lose his length and end up with a tiny cock and becomes an eager bottom, Maybe he shaves all his body and gets some piercings on the way as well. I am sure you could write something really good.

2/22/22, 11:14 PM
@Sentinel, that may be just the spark I needed. Let me have a play with that and see where it leads me ;)

2/25/22, 5:16 PM
@Lusty Stallion love the sound of that 😉 look forward to seeing what you come up with. I love the idea of someone slowly losing all their masculinity and ego and having to rethink their position in life.
2/25/22, 3:43 PM
nice. Loved it.
Martin
2/22/22, 9:44 PM
This is a wonderful, totally depraved, and crazy universe you've created. It's interesting how well received it is, even though so many gay guys keep repeating how they despise cunts (vaginas). But the way you describe how boys are turned into breeders is extremely arousing. I could live without their high pitch voices though. I wonder, are they as high as "our" women's voices or just high pitched compared to most men? The inner conflict the soon-to-be breeders are experiencing is quite interesting. But the one thing that makes me shudder a bit is the sexism that is absolutely apparent in every sentence. The way the bulls are basically toxic males is ruining this a bit for me. I think this would have worked just as well if the breeders and bulls were eye-to-eye and would fully respect each other the way they are. The story wouldn't be any less hot and interesting that way.

2/23/22, 2:09 AM
@Martin Gotta disagree on the sexism/respect thing. I can't say I appreciate toxic masculinity in real life, but as a wannabe slave, it trips my fantasy trigger. There's a story on the Eunuch Archive that does pretty much what you describe ("Malepussy World"), and compared to this one, I just find it meh.

2/25/22, 9:29 AM
@Martin Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated. I agree with you on the toxic masculinity. It is almost supposed to be a little troubling. It is part of the arc for the characters. It isn't going to work for everyone. As for your choice of the word sexism! Consider this there is only one sex in this world. There is no female reference point for any of the characters! So it is definitely an "ism" of some sort but is it sexism? I like to think all the characters see themselves as men. None of the characters use female pronouns. The story for me at least is more about emasculation rather than feminization. Still great considered feedback thanks.

Martin
2/25/22, 10:17 AM
@Speedychopslover I used sexism for a lack of a better word. You didn't give us the proper term for the separation of the two states... 'Breederism' doesn't do it justice, because we don't say 'femalism' in our world either. I'm more than curious about where this is going to. Do you have the further chapters written already or are you still working on them?

2/25/22, 10:38 AM
@Martin. Lol. I am not going to give a term either. Although I do like "Breederism". It is all written and is in 7 parts. I am working with a really great writer and contributor to this site (lloydirving) to do the a final edit on each part. We are going over each part one per week. To just polish it off.

Martin
2/25/22, 10:48 AM
@Speedychopslover 👍
Tyrol
2/24/22, 8:11 PM
This is everything i could ever want from an erotica. Your writing is fantastic and the gradual build up and characters that feel real and diverse are so so good. plus it's long as fuck which is great. would have preferred it uploaded in pieces so i could more easily find the parts i want to re-read, but that's a very tiny complaint. I'm hooked to the story, every single kink is a bullseye for me. i love guys with pussy, guys growing tits (i imagine them as less like female tits and more like big jiggly round pecs), punishing the bullies, the weird nuance of how being a breeder is obviously very pleasurable but everyone still looks at being a breeder as shameful and undesirable which allows it to maintain its kinky feeling. brett becoming more likeable as time passes means he could either become a compassionate (but still sexy) bull or a willing breeder and i like either option. as anyone that has read my stories knows, i also love the bro incest. i don't usually like cages but maybe you've turned me. phenomenal job. i wonder what if any other kinks you'll inject in the future. i won't suggest any because I'm sure you already have a plan but whatever it is I bet I'll like it.

2/25/22, 10:20 AM
@Tyrol Glad you enjoyed the first part. I really was quite wary of posting on this site. I know that this subject can illicit some less than positive reactions. So the feedback has been great. I avoided breaking this up into pieces because I was struggling with the size of the story and I am sure in the editing something would have got lost. However, I really do understand your point. ;-)
2/25/22, 8:59 AM
THIS IS AMAZING! Super sexy and cant wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
2/25/22, 8:43 AM
cant wait to see the wardrobe malfunction
Apr 1, 2021
2/25/22, 5:26 AM
Dang this was really good! I must have missed it the first time around. Glad I noticed it being featured. The twist of the true nature of the drugs was really hot.
2/25/22, 3:37 AM
I Like this. Wish more. Not a sequel just..i don't know. A sort of after action or following a developing change sort of tale Something like this. Maybe a conversation where someone teases and seduces them until fall under sway and join Or enact some ultimate self annihilation for them?
Nov 22, 2018
2/25/22, 3:20 AM
I wish you continued the story,this was good
2/25/22, 3:03 AM
I'm not much into strong smell or "pig" themes but this was fucking good, I loved it