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2/26/22, 12:35 AM
Loved this story, Derek! A bit trippy, but extremely creative and very hot. I liked how the clown kept appearing to guide Smith and exploding into different creatures. All of your stories are very good, but the imagery makes this story one of your best.

2/26/22, 1:59 AM
Thanks @Hypnoguy67! Definitely trippy. Can you believe I was totally sober while I wrote this?

2/26/22, 3:28 AM
@Derek Williams, I have to admit that the thought did cross my mind that maybe you had some "assistance" in creating such a vividly detailed fever dream. Kudos again for your superb writing!
2/25/22, 11:10 PM
We can't use magic We don't have to use magic Just these fireproof roofies, this mind and memory and orientation altering vine, and our cum that will addict him and so on. See i am so resourceful This hurt through the pleasing event. Made stronger with dumb he-man and clever fae who don't even have to try. but then events proceed. Pleasing. Just... Hmm the thumbsucking. The scene description. And he-man's changing mind and feelings and how handles them. Interesting The process nice when taking time. Thanks for that. Pool time.
2/25/22, 9:05 PM
I loved this. Pink World is pretty trippy and when the clown made an appearance, I was expecting it to trigger my coulrophobia. However, bizarrely, that only added to overall story. Superb job.

2/25/22, 10:45 PM
Phew, I'm glad the clown didn't trigger it for you @Speedychopslover. Trust me – I didn't know the clown was coming until he showed up.
Apr 22, 2019
2/25/22, 10:14 PM
How did I miss this story? Thanks for posting it. My gooey cock thanks you too.
8/19/20, 12:37 AM
You know very little about the history of the WW2 and the history of science :(

2/25/22, 7:46 PM
I wasnt writing a history book @Tsakaur
1/7/21, 6:00 PM
Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. A fresh take on the old classic, but you could have "fleshed" this out a little. The story moves way too quickly.

2/25/22, 7:43 PM
thanks where are you from? @Body Odor
2/25/22, 6:19 PM
If anyone didn't know what the old Space Jam site looked like, it's still preserved online. https://www.spacejam.com/1996/

2/25/22, 6:31 PM
Oh wow @Pwrliftermscl – I hadn't realized they'd kept an archive online! I just remembered it from a few years ago before the new movie came out. It was one of the most famously never-updated sites on the internet. Thanks for sharing.
Anonymous
2/25/22, 3:58 PM
great work thanks!!!

2/25/22, 6:29 PM
Thank you! I'm pretty sure this one is a 'love it or hate it' story, so I'm glad you enjoyed!
2/25/22, 3:57 PM
Hot damn! This was fantastic. I loved the descriptions of the Pink World--the perfect blend of surreal paradise and gay fantasia. Phenomenal stuff!

2/25/22, 6:29 PM
Thanks so much @Feed Your Head! My favourite thing about this story is how you think it's going to be a standard 'roommate turns gay' story, and then it swerves off into a fever dream. Whichever part of my mind this came from, I wasn't aware of it until the words were on the page. There's a tiny part of me that hopes the Pink World is real and I'm just getting a glimpse of it.
2/25/22, 8:41 AM
A very creative story! I loved the imagery.

2/25/22, 6:26 PM
Thanks @Norismo! I have no idea where any of it came from, but I've been doing some clowning lately and I think that's working it's way through my subconscious.