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Subboy-00
2/24/22, 9:36 AM
I love the Into the woods reference

2/24/22, 4:06 PM
@Subboy-00 I'm glad someone caught it! I almost spelled it out in the note at the end, but I decided it would be an easter egg from one of the best musicals of all time -- for those who could find it. (I tend to bury things like that in most of my writing on here.)

2/25/22, 12:44 AM
@astrolub I saw that too! "Mother said, come what may, follow the path and never stray..."

2/25/22, 12:46 AM
@Feed Your Head Yuppers. I looked through the copy of the score that I have for a reasonable Red Riding Hood line that wouldn't seem too out-of-context. Talking about "missing all the flowers" (granted, that was the Wolf) would've been weird.
2/24/22, 11:42 PM
Loved this story and its conclusion! I also liked how Simon gave up some of his control as the story progressed. Thanks for writing this hot series.
2/24/22, 10:14 PM
okay, so the mentioned fairy tales are: hansen and gretel, Peter Pan, Golden Locks and the three bears, the ugly duckling, Snow White. three little pigs, a good selection overALL, don't we agree?

2/24/22, 11:14 PM
@darkblade2814 Just to be fair, the only one I have explicitly thought through is what I'm doing next with Henry and Greg, and a teensy tiny bit on the overall arc.

2/24/22, 11:24 PM
@astrolub I know, I'm just listing them to keep track on all the suggestions, so if you decide to work on other chapters, I have already compiled them, so it is easier to keep track
2/24/22, 6:52 PM
I hope you continue this series. Was expecting Red to come across the big bad wolf after the wolf had converted his friends into his muscle pups. But I like how his friend turned out to be the wolf. Maybe the other two friends are stuck in a different fairy tale. Snow white and the seven porn stars could be a possibility. Convert some gay for pay stars into addicts for snow white cum. The three muscular pigs get blown by a big bad wolf before they spit roast the wolf. Thanks for the hard on.

2/24/22, 6:54 PM
@TexMuscle Thanks much. I considered a few different things for the wolf but decided on something softer for this first foray. I can tell you that the other two friends are on their way to a different fairy tale and may cross paths with others. (There's a reason their names start with "H" and "Gre.")

2/24/22, 9:31 PM
@astrolub Sounds like in the next tail someone is going to get eaten out. Looking forward to it.

2/24/22, 9:31 PM
@TexMuscle You read my mind.
2/24/22, 9:00 PM
YES! i love the pattern that is forming here. Another good chapter,really cool. Btw,I googled GB and if he's who I think he is...niiiice
Anonymous
2/24/22, 7:54 PM
When will the next chapter come?
2/24/22, 5:35 PM
I find the setup pretty hot and interesting. And, despite usually not being into mean sprouting vagina stories, you've done it in a way that is very gradual and fairly compelling. It is usually presented as a no-effort change, but it's hot to me how it's very gradual with first getting cut, then caged, then losing erections, to shrinking. I also think it helps by seeing the clit really is just a shrunken, altered cock. I still might have preferred the breeders not having vaginas, just small cocks with childbearing asses or something, but you've done it in a way that still works for me. I found the sex scenes with Zach and the guy who grew breasts to be very hot - I love the resistance to change. This is what really gets me off with this premise, so I'm hopeful to see more of it. And, I do hope Brett becomes a breeder just because the first person POV on that is going to be amazing I'm sure. I love the nuance with how Brett is teaching these guys how to enjoy their bodies, like explaining that their clit isn't a dick anymore so they shouldn't stroke it like it is one. Unfortunately the intensity of the sex scenes wasn't enough to get me off, but it was still very hot.
2/24/22, 9:43 AM
Gross. I read this expecting a "gay bomb" instead got the new age twitter version of "Gay" (not gay at all) with vaginas included. Vaginas are not gay. Wish I could give this negative ratings for false advertisement and failed concept.

Martin
2/24/22, 10:33 AM
@UniversalButthole Read the tags, then you're not surprised. This wasn't advertised incorrectly. You comment is hardly fair. And as you can see from the other comments, your opinion is rather unique.

Tyrol
2/24/22, 5:26 PM
@UniversalButthole i have a boyfriend who has a vagina. I'm pretty gay and he's very masculine and has a beard and everything. i don't feel very straight when i eat him out. it feels even more gay when I'm inside his pussy. I'm pretty sure nobody watching us grunting and moaning would ever call us straight. if you couldn't see his vagina you would never guess he had one. i was attracted to him before i knew he had one and finding out he had one didn't change a thing. I'm not attracted to girls almost at all, whether they have a penis or vagina. I'm pretty sure you, an exclusively gay dude, wouldn't be attracted to a trans girl with a penis so on some level you have to see how your gatekeeping serves no one and only hurts trans people. not that this story has trans people in it. but
2/24/22, 11:52 AM
Love this story! Although I kinda wish there was more detail in Ben's transformation. Did he get younger, was there any changes to his face as well as his body? Just wondering. Also REALLY hope for a sequel. Like some other random guys gets some of that himbo gum!

2/24/22, 4:44 PM
Thanks so much @Person Just Browsing! Ben didn't exactly get younger, but his face tightened up a little and his eyes got sharper. He became a guy in his 50's who takes care of himself, not a guy who's let his body degrade. I don't have a sequel planned for this one, but you never know.

2/24/22, 5:05 PM
@Derek Williams Cool, thanks!
2/24/22, 6:24 AM
Wow, this is great! I love the slow world change--so many would-be "twisted fairy tale" authors cannot strike the balance between references to the original work and the new interpretation. You avoided that trap by seamlessly blending both. Fantastic! I cannot wait to see what other fairy tales you have planned. :)

2/24/22, 4:05 PM
Thank you.