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2/25/22, 3:37 AM
I Like this. Wish more. Not a sequel just..i don't know. A sort of after action or following a developing change sort of tale Something like this. Maybe a conversation where someone teases and seduces them until fall under sway and join Or enact some ultimate self annihilation for them?
Nov 22, 2018
2/25/22, 3:20 AM
I wish you continued the story,this was good
2/25/22, 3:03 AM
I'm not much into strong smell or "pig" themes but this was fucking good, I loved it
Subboy-00
2/24/22, 9:36 AM
I love the Into the woods reference

2/24/22, 4:06 PM
@Subboy-00 I'm glad someone caught it! I almost spelled it out in the note at the end, but I decided it would be an easter egg from one of the best musicals of all time -- for those who could find it. (I tend to bury things like that in most of my writing on here.)

2/25/22, 12:44 AM
@astrolub I saw that too! "Mother said, come what may, follow the path and never stray..."

2/25/22, 12:46 AM
@Feed Your Head Yuppers. I looked through the copy of the score that I have for a reasonable Red Riding Hood line that wouldn't seem too out-of-context. Talking about "missing all the flowers" (granted, that was the Wolf) would've been weird.
2/24/22, 11:42 PM
Loved this story and its conclusion! I also liked how Simon gave up some of his control as the story progressed. Thanks for writing this hot series.
2/24/22, 10:14 PM
okay, so the mentioned fairy tales are: hansen and gretel, Peter Pan, Golden Locks and the three bears, the ugly duckling, Snow White. three little pigs, a good selection overALL, don't we agree?

2/24/22, 11:14 PM
@darkblade2814 Just to be fair, the only one I have explicitly thought through is what I'm doing next with Henry and Greg, and a teensy tiny bit on the overall arc.

2/24/22, 11:24 PM
@astrolub I know, I'm just listing them to keep track on all the suggestions, so if you decide to work on other chapters, I have already compiled them, so it is easier to keep track
2/24/22, 6:52 PM
I hope you continue this series. Was expecting Red to come across the big bad wolf after the wolf had converted his friends into his muscle pups. But I like how his friend turned out to be the wolf. Maybe the other two friends are stuck in a different fairy tale. Snow white and the seven porn stars could be a possibility. Convert some gay for pay stars into addicts for snow white cum. The three muscular pigs get blown by a big bad wolf before they spit roast the wolf. Thanks for the hard on.

2/24/22, 6:54 PM
@TexMuscle Thanks much. I considered a few different things for the wolf but decided on something softer for this first foray. I can tell you that the other two friends are on their way to a different fairy tale and may cross paths with others. (There's a reason their names start with "H" and "Gre.")

2/24/22, 9:31 PM
@astrolub Sounds like in the next tail someone is going to get eaten out. Looking forward to it.

2/24/22, 9:31 PM
@TexMuscle You read my mind.
2/24/22, 9:00 PM
YES! i love the pattern that is forming here. Another good chapter,really cool. Btw,I googled GB and if he's who I think he is...niiiice
Anonymous
2/24/22, 7:54 PM
When will the next chapter come?
2/24/22, 5:35 PM
I find the setup pretty hot and interesting. And, despite usually not being into mean sprouting vagina stories, you've done it in a way that is very gradual and fairly compelling. It is usually presented as a no-effort change, but it's hot to me how it's very gradual with first getting cut, then caged, then losing erections, to shrinking. I also think it helps by seeing the clit really is just a shrunken, altered cock. I still might have preferred the breeders not having vaginas, just small cocks with childbearing asses or something, but you've done it in a way that still works for me. I found the sex scenes with Zach and the guy who grew breasts to be very hot - I love the resistance to change. This is what really gets me off with this premise, so I'm hopeful to see more of it. And, I do hope Brett becomes a breeder just because the first person POV on that is going to be amazing I'm sure. I love the nuance with how Brett is teaching these guys how to enjoy their bodies, like explaining that their clit isn't a dick anymore so they shouldn't stroke it like it is one. Unfortunately the intensity of the sex scenes wasn't enough to get me off, but it was still very hot.