Recent Comments

Tyrol
2/24/22, 8:11 PM
This is everything i could ever want from an erotica. Your writing is fantastic and the gradual build up and characters that feel real and diverse are so so good. plus it's long as fuck which is great. would have preferred it uploaded in pieces so i could more easily find the parts i want to re-read, but that's a very tiny complaint. I'm hooked to the story, every single kink is a bullseye for me. i love guys with pussy, guys growing tits (i imagine them as less like female tits and more like big jiggly round pecs), punishing the bullies, the weird nuance of how being a breeder is obviously very pleasurable but everyone still looks at being a breeder as shameful and undesirable which allows it to maintain its kinky feeling. brett becoming more likeable as time passes means he could either become a compassionate (but still sexy) bull or a willing breeder and i like either option. as anyone that has read my stories knows, i also love the bro incest. i don't usually like cages but maybe you've turned me. phenomenal job. i wonder what if any other kinks you'll inject in the future. i won't suggest any because I'm sure you already have a plan but whatever it is I bet I'll like it.

2/25/22, 10:20 AM
@Tyrol Glad you enjoyed the first part. I really was quite wary of posting on this site. I know that this subject can illicit some less than positive reactions. So the feedback has been great. I avoided breaking this up into pieces because I was struggling with the size of the story and I am sure in the editing something would have got lost. However, I really do understand your point. ;-)
2/25/22, 8:59 AM
THIS IS AMAZING! Super sexy and cant wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
2/25/22, 8:43 AM
cant wait to see the wardrobe malfunction
Apr 1, 2021
2/25/22, 5:26 AM
Dang this was really good! I must have missed it the first time around. Glad I noticed it being featured. The twist of the true nature of the drugs was really hot.
2/25/22, 3:37 AM
I Like this. Wish more. Not a sequel just..i don't know. A sort of after action or following a developing change sort of tale Something like this. Maybe a conversation where someone teases and seduces them until fall under sway and join Or enact some ultimate self annihilation for them?
Nov 22, 2018
2/25/22, 3:20 AM
I wish you continued the story,this was good
2/25/22, 3:03 AM
I'm not much into strong smell or "pig" themes but this was fucking good, I loved it
Subboy-00
2/24/22, 9:36 AM
I love the Into the woods reference

2/24/22, 4:06 PM
@Subboy-00 I'm glad someone caught it! I almost spelled it out in the note at the end, but I decided it would be an easter egg from one of the best musicals of all time -- for those who could find it. (I tend to bury things like that in most of my writing on here.)

2/25/22, 12:44 AM
@astrolub I saw that too! "Mother said, come what may, follow the path and never stray..."

2/25/22, 12:46 AM
@Feed Your Head Yuppers. I looked through the copy of the score that I have for a reasonable Red Riding Hood line that wouldn't seem too out-of-context. Talking about "missing all the flowers" (granted, that was the Wolf) would've been weird.
2/24/22, 11:42 PM
Loved this story and its conclusion! I also liked how Simon gave up some of his control as the story progressed. Thanks for writing this hot series.
2/24/22, 10:14 PM
okay, so the mentioned fairy tales are: hansen and gretel, Peter Pan, Golden Locks and the three bears, the ugly duckling, Snow White. three little pigs, a good selection overALL, don't we agree?

2/24/22, 11:14 PM
@darkblade2814 Just to be fair, the only one I have explicitly thought through is what I'm doing next with Henry and Greg, and a teensy tiny bit on the overall arc.

2/24/22, 11:24 PM
@astrolub I know, I'm just listing them to keep track on all the suggestions, so if you decide to work on other chapters, I have already compiled them, so it is easier to keep track