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2/24/22, 9:43 AM
Gross. I read this expecting a "gay bomb" instead got the new age twitter version of "Gay" (not gay at all) with vaginas included. Vaginas are not gay. Wish I could give this negative ratings for false advertisement and failed concept.

Martin
2/24/22, 10:33 AM
@UniversalButthole Read the tags, then you're not surprised. This wasn't advertised incorrectly. You comment is hardly fair. And as you can see from the other comments, your opinion is rather unique.

Tyrol
2/24/22, 5:26 PM
@UniversalButthole i have a boyfriend who has a vagina. I'm pretty gay and he's very masculine and has a beard and everything. i don't feel very straight when i eat him out. it feels even more gay when I'm inside his pussy. I'm pretty sure nobody watching us grunting and moaning would ever call us straight. if you couldn't see his vagina you would never guess he had one. i was attracted to him before i knew he had one and finding out he had one didn't change a thing. I'm not attracted to girls almost at all, whether they have a penis or vagina. I'm pretty sure you, an exclusively gay dude, wouldn't be attracted to a trans girl with a penis so on some level you have to see how your gatekeeping serves no one and only hurts trans people. not that this story has trans people in it. but
2/24/22, 11:52 AM
Love this story! Although I kinda wish there was more detail in Ben's transformation. Did he get younger, was there any changes to his face as well as his body? Just wondering. Also REALLY hope for a sequel. Like some other random guys gets some of that himbo gum!

2/24/22, 4:44 PM
Thanks so much @Person Just Browsing! Ben didn't exactly get younger, but his face tightened up a little and his eyes got sharper. He became a guy in his 50's who takes care of himself, not a guy who's let his body degrade. I don't have a sequel planned for this one, but you never know.

2/24/22, 5:05 PM
@Derek Williams Cool, thanks!
2/24/22, 6:24 AM
Wow, this is great! I love the slow world change--so many would-be "twisted fairy tale" authors cannot strike the balance between references to the original work and the new interpretation. You avoided that trap by seamlessly blending both. Fantastic! I cannot wait to see what other fairy tales you have planned. :)

2/24/22, 4:05 PM
Thank you.
2/24/22, 4:57 AM
This was right up my alley! Unique concept executed in a tantalizing way. Also a sucker for fairy tales, glad to see this one in particular finally get a pornofied take on this site. Maybe Peter Pan could be a fun one to play around with in the future?

2/24/22, 4:05 PM
@Wakka Thank you. Peter Pan's relationship with Tinkerbell has always been interesting to me, ever since I saw Julia Roberts' portrayal in Hook. Of course, there's also a bunch that could be done on a ship full of pirates.
Anonymous
2/24/22, 2:08 AM
I thought this was a really unique prompt and really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it with me.

2/24/22, 4:03 PM
Thanks.
2/23/22, 10:04 PM
Everybody made a big deal out of Greg Maguire's novel WICKED when it debuted nearly thirty years ago. Personally, I liked it a lot, but I LOVED the second novel of that series, CONFESSIONS OF AN UGLY STEPSISTER so much better! This was a really fun take on a classic and really shows your strength at world-building and character. Please don't apologize for your sex scenes -- and never admit you "don't know how to write" something! Sex scenes are hard to write -- period. It takes time and practice. You're doing a fine job. I REALLY liked this story and hope you can find some new interpretations of others. There's a really intriguing series here.

2/24/22, 4:03 PM
@absman420 Thank you.
Anonymous
2/24/22, 2:27 PM
great concept! please make more!
2/24/22, 1:05 PM
This was great! and the cock shrinking and humiliation if a bully was the best part
2/24/22, 9:24 AM
this pushes all my buttons. please cont....
2/24/22, 8:43 AM
The math confuses me. If they earn 15,000 and 9,000 goes to interest and 4000 for overhead that leaves 2,000 to pay the debt. So it would take 45 months to pay back the money or 3 years and 9 months so almost 4 years.