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2/24/22, 6:24 AM
Wow, this is great! I love the slow world change--so many would-be "twisted fairy tale" authors cannot strike the balance between references to the original work and the new interpretation. You avoided that trap by seamlessly blending both. Fantastic! I cannot wait to see what other fairy tales you have planned. :)

2/24/22, 4:05 PM
Thank you.
2/24/22, 4:57 AM
This was right up my alley! Unique concept executed in a tantalizing way. Also a sucker for fairy tales, glad to see this one in particular finally get a pornofied take on this site. Maybe Peter Pan could be a fun one to play around with in the future?

2/24/22, 4:05 PM
@Wakka Thank you. Peter Pan's relationship with Tinkerbell has always been interesting to me, ever since I saw Julia Roberts' portrayal in Hook. Of course, there's also a bunch that could be done on a ship full of pirates.
Anonymous
2/24/22, 2:08 AM
I thought this was a really unique prompt and really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it with me.

2/24/22, 4:03 PM
Thanks.
2/23/22, 10:04 PM
Everybody made a big deal out of Greg Maguire's novel WICKED when it debuted nearly thirty years ago. Personally, I liked it a lot, but I LOVED the second novel of that series, CONFESSIONS OF AN UGLY STEPSISTER so much better! This was a really fun take on a classic and really shows your strength at world-building and character. Please don't apologize for your sex scenes -- and never admit you "don't know how to write" something! Sex scenes are hard to write -- period. It takes time and practice. You're doing a fine job. I REALLY liked this story and hope you can find some new interpretations of others. There's a really intriguing series here.

2/24/22, 4:03 PM
@absman420 Thank you.
Anonymous
2/24/22, 2:27 PM
great concept! please make more!
2/24/22, 1:05 PM
This was great! and the cock shrinking and humiliation if a bully was the best part
2/24/22, 9:24 AM
this pushes all my buttons. please cont....
2/24/22, 8:43 AM
The math confuses me. If they earn 15,000 and 9,000 goes to interest and 4000 for overhead that leaves 2,000 to pay the debt. So it would take 45 months to pay back the money or 3 years and 9 months so almost 4 years.
2/24/22, 8:38 AM
Will they still have to be within 5 feet of each other AFTER they pay Devlin back? Is that part of the perma-curse?
Jesse
2/24/22, 6:42 AM
I will serve the