Recent Comments

2/22/22, 1:59 AM
Very hot even though there was no sex. Being turned into a slave who does nothing but build and show off muscle...very, very hot. I also enjoy stories told primarily through dialogue, and you did that very well. I have to admit that if this were a real world choice for me, I would choose enslavement just as Austin did.

2/22/22, 2:38 AM
@ControlMe Thank you! i love writing dialogue -- I think it's my strength.
jj
2/22/22, 1:00 AM
Your writing is very descriptive. Hot steamy story and am looking forward to more.

2/22/22, 1:04 AM
@jj thanks man!
2/22/22, 12:24 AM
super memorable stories! cant wait for the next
2/21/22, 11:03 PM
God, this is so good! I love a good tit fucking and a good mind control. I look forward to the next part of the boys breaking in He-Man. Great job!

2/21/22, 11:41 PM
@Some Guy thanks man!
spiralthiago
2/21/22, 10:53 PM
i love this history🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤
2/21/22, 10:43 PM
Great writing. Vivid ‘world-building’. Engaging characters, especially Brett. He’s a great protagonist. I am so engaged. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Amazing work!
2/21/22, 9:35 PM
Just by the writing, I already know who this is from lol Love your stories so much, man.
2/21/22, 9:16 PM
I loved this as Deckers and I still love it. ;-)
2/21/22, 8:43 PM
Why am I so turned this!!? Holy hell this is crazy good writing. I think Ive jerked off 12 times to this and checked the page dozens of times for the next installment.

2/21/22, 8:59 PM
@Unicorn High praise indeed. I posted this story on my blog a few days ago and my first review was from a regular who told me he "came buckets" I think as a writer of this sort of story that is always good to hear. The next installment will be next week sorry. Maybe you could rub out a few more to this part and do keep me posted on your progress. This is the kind of feedback I love.
2/21/22, 5:14 PM
great writing, the story has had me thinking about it ever since i read it. very thought provoking and hot at the same time. can't wait for the next set of chapters.

2/21/22, 7:12 PM
@Flamefox23 Thanks. I am pleased this part of the story had an impact. Also that you took the time to comment. Makes the effort of pulling something like this together worthwhile.