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2/18/22, 11:50 AM
It is an excellent work, thank you very much for your talent made writing. You leave the bar too high to continue the series, it's not so easy to do it now hahaha... . Very, very good job. Congratulations.
jay
2/18/22, 4:57 AM
i would also like to see where this goes.

2/18/22, 11:39 AM
@jay Thank you! Glad to have you on board.
2/18/22, 1:53 AM
Nice chapter! I like the anticipation building with his slow changes. Sorry to hear you've been under the weather, I wonder if that experience affected how you wrote about Max being sick. Maybe you're turning into a werewolf? :O Also, love the David Bowie reference in the title.

2/18/22, 11:39 AM
@Voxel Thank you so much! Yes, I love a slow transformation, it's quite exciting. Oh my God, I must delirious, I didn't even notice the connection of my being sick to Max's haha! It probably did influence the story. Maybe I am, awrooo! :P I'm so glad someone caught the music reference!
2/18/22, 12:13 AM
very curious to see where it goes! I'm guessing the dog boy becomes the sub ultimately? Really interesting

2/18/22, 11:35 AM
@Botbot You'll have to wait and see to find out! :D
2/18/22, 10:22 AM
I also want to know more. I don't know what Dylan's job will be but I wish to see. (I swing between "he will be bait" and "he will be the hunter", with a possible "telepathic power" twist for the latter.)
Anonymous
2/18/22, 10:11 AM
cant wait for the next chapter!
2/18/22, 9:43 AM
uhm please continue this is so hot!
Zai
2/18/22, 9:21 AM
Sub motorcycle cop stories are hot, and you did the theme very well. You should do a sequel, with the cop in full police uniform, especially the boots and tight uniform breeches. Have our new dom slit those breeches right over his bitch's cop-cunt then the dom plows his sub's pussy through the slit. Fucking the stud bottom cop Slut in all his police regalia glory. 👅🔥👅🔥👅🔥👅🔥
Zai
2/18/22, 8:44 AM
H🔥T Damn! Conner and his cunt are just too, too needy for cock! Donnie's real cock or Tommy's fantasy cock. No matter what, the superhero and his pussy are now completely bitched... just as it should be! I hope you'll be including the bitching of the Superman arc into your story soon. Lex needs super twat, too, and Clark's Kryptonian Kunt needs taming and breeding ASAP! HUGE THANKS for another stellar chapter! 🔥🔥🔥👅👅👅♥️♥️♥️
two day carrot
2/18/22, 7:05 AM
It's hot, but this one feels vague and unfinished. It reminds me heavily of Bolshoi Papa, which I would also like you to continue, but that series feels more developed.