Recent Comments

2/17/22, 9:10 AM
Very exciting, can't wait to read more!
Ben
2/17/22, 8:19 AM
Very hot!! Would love more stories from you!
Feb 16, 2022
2/17/22, 2:40 AM
Ahahaha! I was thinking to myself as I read this... "Hmmmm this reminds me of Plankton's brain control helmets from that one Spongebob movie..." And then I saw your note haha. As cheesy as that was, I won't deny it gave me an MC boner when I saw it in the theater as a kid, especially when King Neptune gets bucketed and controlled. (Just too bad they didn't use the hotter, tv one.) I like this theme/flavour of mind control actually, so it would be very cool if you expanded on it. Would love to see what happens next. :)

2/17/22, 6:53 AM
glad I wasn't the only one and that the author had the same inspiration lmao
Feb 16, 2022
2/17/22, 5:55 AM
Loved it! Given the somewhat goofy premise, I was surprised by how much this turned me on. I was just a little confused on whether the story was set in the US or UK, because it switches randomly between British and American slang.
Feb 16, 2022
2/17/22, 5:34 AM
I really hope you make more chapters of this story. I love a good drone/mind control story to get me all hard & stiff.
2/16/22, 11:33 PM
Excellent new chapter. I really can't wait to see how this all shapes up with Parasite kicking around!

2/17/22, 4:22 AM
@Some Guy thx man!
1/11/20, 1:37 PM
Thanks everyone for the comments! I'm trying to run one chapter ahead of publication, so the next chapter will be released once chapter 4 (day 3) has been written.

2/16/22, 2:14 PM
@Varlance Any chance you might continue this still?

2/16/22, 8:08 PM
@Beaner - it's unlikely at the moment, working on other projects!

2/17/22, 12:51 AM
@Varlance that's ok. All your stories are incredibly hot.
2/17/22, 12:31 AM
Damn . So so good!
Anonymous
2/16/22, 11:22 PM
it feels rude to urge you to keep writing, but this is just so good. That being foreign to things is so well portrayed here and it's honestly so hot.

2/16/22, 11:51 PM
@Anon, it's not rude at all! We writers *thrive* on positive feedback! I'm really glad that Emrys came off the page for you so well, he was really fun to write!
Feb 16, 2022
Anonymous
2/16/22, 11:26 PM
Short but sweet! Wouldn’t say no to a follow up on ;)