Recent Comments

2/13/22, 6:35 PM
Hot! And I liked how it was the jerk who had the magical device at the beginning, but ended up getting his in the end, as opposed to a straight up revenge story. Nice twist at the end : ) Cheers, LLOYD
2/13/22, 6:30 PM
looking forward to more
Anonymous
2/13/22, 6:25 PM
wow ok live the start hope there is more!
2/13/22, 5:44 PM
hot story. will there be a part 2
Art
2/13/22, 5:43 PM
One of my favorites of yours. Glad you're resurrecting them for new audiences. Keep up your great skills.
Anonymous
2/13/22, 5:18 PM
Wow! As a big fan of this type of fiction (dumbing down), this is a crazy hot take. Love the idea of a literally 2nd personality.
Anonymous
2/13/22, 4:59 PM
I'm impressed he started practicing law at 15. A prodigy!

2/13/22, 5:17 PM
I probably just wrote the wrong number.
2/13/22, 4:49 PM
This is by far the best Jack Parker story yet!!! So hot on so many levels.
2/13/22, 3:42 PM
Oink Oink brilliant transformation!
2/13/22, 3:40 PM
So great to have you back in action, AgainstMyWill!