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EJG
2/13/22, 8:48 AM
Hot stuff. The little masochist sub in me,woulda loved the less happier ending with Kev still in control.Sorry,but sometimes i love a hot bully!Thats just me! BUT HOT STORY regardless!
2/13/22, 6:12 AM
More, please!
2/13/22, 6:03 AM
This is off to a great start! Really sexy premise and I can't help but wonder if Steve isn't taking advantage of the situation a little bit. I hope you decide to write more!
Jan 7, 2022
2/13/22, 4:26 AM
So very glad to see that you are writing again, also, very fun story! c:
2/13/22, 4:02 AM
Very well done! I was secretly hoping that Steve was really the original guy and this was his elaborate scenario for getting the narrator to accept his new life.
ejaculaTe
2/13/22, 3:28 AM
Always boner-inducing fiction from you, and this series did not disappoint.
2/12/22, 11:59 PM
I loved this. Hit the perfect tone of showing Kevin being a jerk by how he made his changes, to himself and to Mike and Dave, without showing him being a jerk before the story started. Great way to show instead of tell, IMO, with no wasted time. I actually forgot about the story contest when I started to read, so was surprised at the very end with the role reversal, and found that super hot. Dave not even being aware he was making changes, and reinforcing all of the things Kevin had tried to do to him and to Mike, was the icing on the cake.

2/13/22, 2:07 AM
@MonsterMash62 something else I loved was how it has a happy ending kind of. It’s mostly happy because Kevin ends up the worst off, but based on how they all started, it’s not really a happy ending. Kevin isn’t straight anymore and got his just desserts, but Dave is no longer a woman and Mike is gay when he wasn’t before. And yet, Dave and Mike at least are happy, and it was a happy ending for me, the reader (because I love all of that). So it’s a twisted happy ending. So good, and so hot.

Anteros
2/13/22, 2:37 AM
@MonsterMash62 I was just thinking about this actually!! I literally had the word-for-word thought "it's mainly a happy ending for the reader" lol... I think it's also fun that honestly neither Kevin NOR Mike is that likable a person, they're both competitive argumentative straight men, and both of them end up becoming twinks obsessed with man meat instead of barbecue. It feels very karmic, even tho it's easy to not think too much about the light horror aspect of the changes to the MC from his perspective
Anonymous
2/13/22, 2:13 AM
Loved it!
2/13/22, 2:06 AM
Liking this so far.
Anonymous
2/13/22, 12:57 AM
excellent work