very hot !

Can't wait to read the next part!

Great story! In my mind, I could envision Chris not being happy with his "dream job", quitting and returning to DroneTech.

Thank you everyone who followed this series and thank you for your patience on this final chapter. I also appreciate the comments and feedbacks. This was my first ever piece of writing outside of school and I genuinely enjoyed it and made me realize how much I enjoy writing and may try to explore it a little more. I've said this before, but this is a community piece and is by no means some IP so if you guys want to wholesale take the premise or even the world/story I created by all means run with it. Just maybe don't ruin the happy ending I have my children. They had a rough time and deserve to be happy. As for myself, Im gonna take a bit of a break writing on this site but I'm always bored and horny so I have plenty more depraved ideas to run with. I even have a spin off series in this universe that's a tie in to the main story. I'll probably come back to work on that next and what not, though the chapters will be mostly sex and shorter haha. That said, if anybody wants me to write some kind of story for some reason I guess it would be an interesting challenge and i'd probably be up to it lol. Regarding the twist regarding the jungle book. Yea it was pretty obvious most likely but I did think it would be kinda fun, especially since im pretty sure that movie is the progenitor of the Hypno Kink much like Disney's Robin Hood is the progenitor of the Furry Community. I even tried to make it as obvious as possible including the titles. Starting with Chapter 10, I titled each chapter after lyrics/quotes by jungle book characters. "That's what friends are for": Is the one line sang by Sher Kahn (aka Dean K) in that one song by the vultures who were modeled after the Beatles. "I wanna be like you": Is pretty obvious with Dean L (King Louie). Though fun fact, anybody who pays way too much attention to "The Jungle Book" Would recognize that "Flunkie" is wholesale ripped off from the monkey with the fan leaf called "Flunky" "I wanna stay in the jungle": Is a common line by Mowgli. As for Mukuro, I got the inspiration from Rokudo Mukruro, an early anime villain turned ally from the show "Hitman Reborn" Who had a magic eye that created illusions, summoned creatures, and could posses people. He also hated humanity so I thought it would be an interesting homage to a character I really love. Trust in Me: Again REALLY obvious. Though there was still some fun stuff there. I called his eyes "Emerald Eyes" because I remember hearing something about an Emerald Eye snake that could hypnotize its prey. As for his title of "Master of all Masters" I may be a huge Kingdom Hearts nerd and may be obsessed with that guy. So since that series is also very gay I thought I would just model the masters after Org XIII in a dumb homage only I thought would be neat. And Yes I did just tell you all of this crap cause I am way too proud of this stuff haha

I hope he transforms more homophobes!

A great ending!

Wow, I'm *so* not proud of Mark because Mark isn't a real person but a fictional character. Equally true, this was a tease, tease, tease story that never built up or lived up. [As Marcia points out, in 17 chapters, you have one chapter where Mark and Steve has sex as sub and dom](https://sickofitradlz.blogspot.com/2022/02/dog-days-are-beginning-is-awful-online.html). One chapter. Tease, tease, tease. She's also right that Steve needs to have some conflict and not be so damn passive for this to have any real drama. There is none. It's a bad first draft that another writer needs to grab and rework because the roots were there but it was not pulled off. This is the sort of bland Gary Marshall Exit to Eden bull where you pretend you're going to explore dom and sub but then cop out because you're too damn cowardly and instead want to tease. The immaturity level of this piece is shocking. the author was offered good criticism throughout the posting of chapters (which went up first at Nifty) but ignored the suggestions -- whether a dom or a sub was explaining it to him, the author ignored it. His story would have greatly benefited from him utilzing feedback. As it stands, this is a cock tease story that never lives up to its promise and treats the dom and sub experience as something to sneer at and escape from. Mark and Steve are suburban Karens trying to be 'hip' but in the end just want it vanila. Take that nosnene to a site that doesn't explore s&m themes. What a cowardly story and, considering the audience here, what an insulting one. I'm a dom and proud of it. My sub and I don't need to run from who we are or work through our 'kinks' to be 'normal.' This story basically is as insulting as gay conversion therapy.

That was fun! I do prefer less happy endings for protagonists, but this was up my alley. Good job!

this is a really cool story, I hope you end up doing more chapters of it!

Well, I seem to have a new favorite author on this site : )