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2/12/22, 11:59 PM
I loved this. Hit the perfect tone of showing Kevin being a jerk by how he made his changes, to himself and to Mike and Dave, without showing him being a jerk before the story started. Great way to show instead of tell, IMO, with no wasted time. I actually forgot about the story contest when I started to read, so was surprised at the very end with the role reversal, and found that super hot. Dave not even being aware he was making changes, and reinforcing all of the things Kevin had tried to do to him and to Mike, was the icing on the cake.

2/13/22, 2:07 AM
@MonsterMash62 something else I loved was how it has a happy ending kind of. It’s mostly happy because Kevin ends up the worst off, but based on how they all started, it’s not really a happy ending. Kevin isn’t straight anymore and got his just desserts, but Dave is no longer a woman and Mike is gay when he wasn’t before. And yet, Dave and Mike at least are happy, and it was a happy ending for me, the reader (because I love all of that). So it’s a twisted happy ending. So good, and so hot.

Anteros
2/13/22, 2:37 AM
@MonsterMash62 I was just thinking about this actually!! I literally had the word-for-word thought "it's mainly a happy ending for the reader" lol... I think it's also fun that honestly neither Kevin NOR Mike is that likable a person, they're both competitive argumentative straight men, and both of them end up becoming twinks obsessed with man meat instead of barbecue. It feels very karmic, even tho it's easy to not think too much about the light horror aspect of the changes to the MC from his perspective
Anonymous
2/13/22, 2:13 AM
Loved it!
2/13/22, 2:06 AM
Liking this so far.
Anonymous
2/13/22, 12:57 AM
excellent work
Evan
2/12/22, 11:34 PM
Congratulations on finishing this series. And creating the Omegaverse. :) I'm thrilled to hear you are enjoying writing and I hope you do a lot more. I've seen it evolve through the series and your stories are much easier to fall into with the formatting changes. I like writing too and it's a constant learning experience. You have a talented imagination and deliciously horny mind. Hehe. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next. If I can offer a suggestion, I've been working on a technique for writing called "show don't tell". I see a lot of authors on this site develop it and it adds another layer of immersion and enjoyment, I guess. I'm finding it is changing the way I approach scenes when I write so if you're interested, do some Googling on that. Once again, huge congratulations and I wish you lots more writing fun!
2/12/22, 11:30 PM
I love a good happy ending
Anteros
2/12/22, 11:14 PM
*God* this was hot... the entire first three quarters or so really captured the hotness of "asshole controller who you don't want to win but the changes are too sexy to care," and the twist turnabout near the end was soooo fun. I prefer happy endings, but even with that aside the sudden role reversal and loss of control was just *hot*. Great work!!
Evan
2/12/22, 10:33 PM
Another great story of finding and accepting desires. I tend to gloss over the feminine speak, personally, but I get that adds to the former straight-guy's humiliation. I particularly love how he thinks he wants to stop but finds his body overriding him and a deep desire he needs filled. And submitting to it and becoming a whore and loving it. And sure looks like he'll be in heaven, and busy. Thanks for another great series!
2/12/22, 9:55 PM
To think I almost skipped by the first chapter because it was about monsters! I have to echo the previous comments and say that this story totally blew me away. It moved me in a way that I don't expect - especially from an on-line monster story. It was a pure joy to read, Bro. And I think you ended it the way it had to end--not happy, but hopeful. Thanks so much for this. Truly... Cheers, LLOYD

2/12/22, 10:24 PM
@Lloyd311 Thanks for the excellent message. Yeah, this one was an all consuming task.
2/12/22, 9:19 PM
This was so lurid and funny. Super hot.