Congratulations on finishing this series. And creating the Omegaverse. :) I'm thrilled to hear you are enjoying writing and I hope you do a lot more. I've seen it evolve through the series and your stories are much easier to fall into with the formatting changes. I like writing too and it's a constant learning experience. You have a talented imagination and deliciously horny mind. Hehe. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next. If I can offer a suggestion, I've been working on a technique for writing called "show don't tell". I see a lot of authors on this site develop it and it adds another layer of immersion and enjoyment, I guess. I'm finding it is changing the way I approach scenes when I write so if you're interested, do some Googling on that. Once again, huge congratulations and I wish you lots more writing fun!

I love a good happy ending

*God* this was hot... the entire first three quarters or so really captured the hotness of "asshole controller who you don't want to win but the changes are too sexy to care," and the twist turnabout near the end was soooo fun. I prefer happy endings, but even with that aside the sudden role reversal and loss of control was just *hot*. Great work!!

Another great story of finding and accepting desires. I tend to gloss over the feminine speak, personally, but I get that adds to the former straight-guy's humiliation. I particularly love how he thinks he wants to stop but finds his body overriding him and a deep desire he needs filled. And submitting to it and becoming a whore and loving it. And sure looks like he'll be in heaven, and busy. Thanks for another great series!

To think I almost skipped by the first chapter because it was about monsters! I have to echo the previous comments and say that this story totally blew me away. It moved me in a way that I don't expect - especially from an on-line monster story. It was a pure joy to read, Bro. And I think you ended it the way it had to end--not happy, but hopeful. Thanks so much for this. Truly... Cheers, LLOYD

This was so lurid and funny. Super hot.

very hot !

Can't wait to read the next part!

Great story! In my mind, I could envision Chris not being happy with his "dream job", quitting and returning to DroneTech.

Thank you everyone who followed this series and thank you for your patience on this final chapter. I also appreciate the comments and feedbacks. This was my first ever piece of writing outside of school and I genuinely enjoyed it and made me realize how much I enjoy writing and may try to explore it a little more. I've said this before, but this is a community piece and is by no means some IP so if you guys want to wholesale take the premise or even the world/story I created by all means run with it. Just maybe don't ruin the happy ending I have my children. They had a rough time and deserve to be happy. As for myself, Im gonna take a bit of a break writing on this site but I'm always bored and horny so I have plenty more depraved ideas to run with. I even have a spin off series in this universe that's a tie in to the main story. I'll probably come back to work on that next and what not, though the chapters will be mostly sex and shorter haha. That said, if anybody wants me to write some kind of story for some reason I guess it would be an interesting challenge and i'd probably be up to it lol. Regarding the twist regarding the jungle book. Yea it was pretty obvious most likely but I did think it would be kinda fun, especially since im pretty sure that movie is the progenitor of the Hypno Kink much like Disney's Robin Hood is the progenitor of the Furry Community. I even tried to make it as obvious as possible including the titles. Starting with Chapter 10, I titled each chapter after lyrics/quotes by jungle book characters. "That's what friends are for": Is the one line sang by Sher Kahn (aka Dean K) in that one song by the vultures who were modeled after the Beatles. "I wanna be like you": Is pretty obvious with Dean L (King Louie). Though fun fact, anybody who pays way too much attention to "The Jungle Book" Would recognize that "Flunkie" is wholesale ripped off from the monkey with the fan leaf called "Flunky" "I wanna stay in the jungle": Is a common line by Mowgli. As for Mukuro, I got the inspiration from Rokudo Mukruro, an early anime villain turned ally from the show "Hitman Reborn" Who had a magic eye that created illusions, summoned creatures, and could posses people. He also hated humanity so I thought it would be an interesting homage to a character I really love. Trust in Me: Again REALLY obvious. Though there was still some fun stuff there. I called his eyes "Emerald Eyes" because I remember hearing something about an Emerald Eye snake that could hypnotize its prey. As for his title of "Master of all Masters" I may be a huge Kingdom Hearts nerd and may be obsessed with that guy. So since that series is also very gay I thought I would just model the masters after Org XIII in a dumb homage only I thought would be neat. And Yes I did just tell you all of this crap cause I am way too proud of this stuff haha